Comments: 23
dragonheart252 [2016-07-01 01:51:59 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I really like this piece as you manage to translate a song into your own image, which is very interesting. I don't know the song too well so I had to search it up on youtube.As I listen, I can see how you created this image which I find you incorporated very well.
I gave vision a 2 as although well made, the picture doesn't have any confirmed meanings unless one listen to the song. Before reviewing, I had no idea that happy little pills exist. I gave technique and impact both a 2.5 as everything is simple. The impact works with the song, and if one doesn't know what the song is, they would just see this as a simple picture of a girl smoking. The technique is great and works well for this picture, however as i said before, is very simple. I gave originality a 3.5 as you took the style of TDI and made it more of your creativity. You added tattoos and interesting clothing choices that makes this character yours. I gave originality such a low score as the style is also not anything new.
For places of improvements, try to keep the arms even in length. The arm on the right is vastly smaller than the one on the left, which disrupt the sense of symmetry this character's body establish with her face down to her legs. Also, your artwork could add in more stuff that could also fit the song. The filter is done beautifully, but I feel like you could add in items to fill in the empty gaps and make it stand out even more. These are only suggestions I believe you could use to improve other artworks and to use your skills to the fullest.
I gave this artwork a low rating as I believe you still have plenty of rooms to improve. But just because it have a low review doesn't mean it is not a nice picture. I really like this picture and it represent the song in a wonderful way. You took a simple art style and used it in you own way. I hope you read this critique and find it helpful. If not, I'm sorry. But if so, I hope you continue to create even better art than now to make even more people notice your potential. Love the work and I hope you will continue your process for great success.
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uberbomb [2017-04-09 19:41:55 +0000 UTC]
she is so beautiful
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isrrael120 [2016-07-02 00:26:41 +0000 UTC]
I love I am beautiful
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bublgams [2016-07-01 08:06:02 +0000 UTC]
HAPPY LITTLE PILL OMFG. I love that song! I like how you were inspired by the aesthetic feels to make this!
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Sherlock-Homegurl [2016-07-01 03:56:22 +0000 UTC]
And somebody claimed that you're ain't talented? Bitch, this is beautiful!
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Sherlock-Homegurl In reply to xPoisoned-Youth [2016-07-01 04:17:54 +0000 UTC]
It's the morning him so you, I made your day or something.
No problem, fam~
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puehrille [2016-07-01 03:38:48 +0000 UTC]
i freakin love troye oh my gosh
love this picture too <3
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xPoisoned-Youth In reply to puehrille [2016-07-01 03:41:58 +0000 UTC]
everyone should love troye its like a way of life tbh
thanks so much! i worked hard on it ahhh
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Rain-Wings [2016-07-01 00:49:34 +0000 UTC]
FUCKING GONE VIK SHE LOOKS SO FUCKING GOOD I CAN'T EVEN RN FUCKING DEAD
VIK I'M SCREAMING RN <3
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TDITannerS [2016-06-30 23:49:42 +0000 UTC]
YAS! Such a beauty
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