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Published: 2009-11-29 17:50:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2565; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 26
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Chris: Well I am writing a HxH fanfiction at the moment (okay, theres only one Chapter and the epilouge left >.>...)and when I had some freetime in my schoolbreak I began to scribble how Senritsu would look in this fanfiction.
well she looks even more chubby in this winterjacket then she already is XD
...´guess the next one would be Kurapika and maybe the OC I made for this story (Who already die in the first chapter O_o poor, poor guy...)
Comment of my english Teacher when she saw the picture: "How cute >.<"
Me: "...o.o" Thinking* Why are you looking at my artblock instead of teaching a lesson??????????*
color the picture if you want. (But please make her long shirt/Dress? red >.< I so love this color
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She so cuuuuutte !! I really like your picture ! Do you loves Senritsu ? Me, I love she !!!!
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Chris: uh..wwll..do as you please. But this sketch is so OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLDDDDDDDD. ^-^
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It's still awesome ♥ I will post it when I finish ♥
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It's funny how Senritsu looks cute despite her appearance! You draw her very well too!
I read your summary; I applaud you for making the vampire a nasty corpse being like in the old legends!
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Chris: Thank you!
Heheh, I satill wonder how senritsu manage to be cute and hideous at the same time XD
Well I always like the old legends more then the new interpretations. What could I say? I love creepy stuff XD
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It's her sweet personality showing through. She makes kind and concerned expressions because she is a nice person. I think that makes her one of the best female manga characters ever because she doesn't have to be beautiful.
Lol, I just like old legends.
Romanticizing monsters is boring.
And honestly, the nasty corpse-like blood-suckers are cooler vampires anyway.
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Chris: Hell Yeah!!
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Btw.. I love Senritsu now.
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Chris: I use just normal black pencils..o.o
Why you love her NOW ? O_o
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When I use normal black pencils everything usually turns out too messy .. 
Ehm.. when I was watching the series I liked her only a little bit.. and I didn´t cared about her much in the end.. But thanks to your art I have started to love her. 
(Sorry, my bad english again
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Chris: Aww man, I am good! XD
I just felt in love with her since the part when her background story is shown.
*dance*
But I am glad that I am not the only one anymore, who likes her ;D
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-^__^- .. My best friend loved Senritsu already when she first time saw a picture of her.
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Chris: Whehehehe ^-^
Well, until she tell her story, I didn´t even noticed her (Just nearly fall from the chair when I had read the "I am a women" part in the manga XD)
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Chris: I laughed very hard that day. XD
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You like Senritsu ? Me, I'm totally in love with this music too cute kawai desu ;3 ^^ (I'm apologize if my English isn't very good)
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sounds interesting X3 what language is it in, lol? I'd like to read it but my German is pretty poor
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Chris: Sorry, its written in german XD
And I have some huge problems to translate it in english, because I have a very....a very typical german writingstyle, what could I say? Its Goethes and Schillers fault. XD
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Chris: Her is a little part from the second chapter-
[...]
The damned girl had a strange, foul taste in her mouth, a disgusting flavour of sweet decay, which made her choke.
Finally the young women wiped hard the sleeve of her jacket over her mouth, again, again and again, until her thin lips were sore and red but the taste didn´t disappear.
Her little hands scraped frantically over her lips, then her cheeks and then her chin, she tried desperately to shoo the creepy taste of sweet decay.
Already she felt warm, sticky blood trickling down her face.
[...]
I know...its horrible englis T.T
sorry.
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Lol, well, that's what I figured, but that's why I asked. It's a shame I can't read it, but you can summarize it for me sometime ^^
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Chris: WEll, do you know the original european vampire myths?
The vampires, or nosferatu (or whatever >.<
In this story I mixed this myth with the Nen.
Wing said that Nen don´t dosappear after the death of its owner and that nen is related with the emotions of the owner.
So just imagine if someone is just so scared of death that he can´t exept it and this fear turned into hate. So that the nen owner comes back from his grave to haunt the living. >.>
So thats the background of the story.
In the story senritsu gets a massage from a friend that the Grave of HIka (You named him so, do you remember?) was plundered. So she go to her homevillage to look after the grave but she wasen´t there since she was cursed and don´t know that the Sonata of darkness even cursed the village and the enviorment with a toxic nen.
well and the rest of it I can´t explain >.<
sorry.
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Yeah, I know that mythology, lol. OOh, sounds interesting. Oh no,it sounds so complex. It's a real shame I won't get to read it, but I hope you get good comments back on it. It seems really interesting and well thought out ^^
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Chris: Nya..it´s not THAT complex. Its more on the psychological basis XD
But my Beta-reader told me, that she think the story would make a good thriller XD
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Oh, I love thrillers
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Chris: ^^
Do you read the little part of the story I send you?
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The reply didn't show up but I just found it. Oh, that's relaly good
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Chris: Yeah. I even begged a friend of mine on knees to help me to translate it, because he can speak english very well.
BUt I am still waiting for hie replie T^T
What kinds of mistakes I have made?
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Oh, they are really basic stuff. It's sorta hard to explain, but basically, some parts sound a bit awkward, so rearrangement, or word changes can fix that simply.
Here, I'll fix it up really quickly, hopefully I get it right:
"The cursed girl had a strange, foul taste in her mouth, a disgusting flavour of sweet decay, which made her choke.
Finally the young woman wiped the sleeve of her jacket hard across her mouth, again, again and again, until her thin lips were sore and red, but still the taste didn´t disappear.
Her little hands scraped frantically over her lips, then her cheeks, and then her chin, as she tried desperately to force away the creepy taste of the decay.
Already she felt the warm, sticky blood trickling down her face."
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Chris: Ah, I see now.
thank you
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Chris: danke für die blumen.
sag mal bestalkst du meinen account oder warum kam das KOmmentar so schnell? O_o
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bittö
Ö_ö ist das Bild erst on!? ich hab den account auf ner favo liste, da wird angezeigt, wenn n neues bild von meinen favo accounts hochgeladen wird^^
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Chris: Höchstens ne halbe stunde on o.o
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