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xReiichiru — .:Cake is Hers:.

Published: 2011-11-26 14:54:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 402; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 9
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Description Lol. I haven't finished -anything- in months!
I started this at 3am this morning, worked through until 5.30 ish, then got up at 11.30 and worked through until 2 x) I'm back bitches!

I like how it came out. Still a few things wrong with it, but hey, I tried my best. Wish me luck with the contest! >o<
Critique appreciated!


Character belongs to *Sakukko
For the Cake or Death Contest
Art belongs to =xReiichiru
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Comments: 15

puppydog83 [2012-05-06 18:30:00 +0000 UTC]

ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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xReiichiru In reply to puppydog83 [2012-05-06 19:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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puppydog83 In reply to xReiichiru [2012-05-07 20:23:53 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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DarkNext [2011-12-02 03:05:54 +0000 UTC]

we are two (well, not anymore XD)

really cute and lively, the expression is cartoonish :3

just would mark the leg, seems a bit off with the angle

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xReiichiru In reply to DarkNext [2011-12-02 23:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the leg came out a little weird; but it's such a weird pose, I'm not quite sure what I can do to fix it x3 I'll try if I use this kind of pose again though x)

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DarkNext In reply to xReiichiru [2011-12-15 22:22:56 +0000 UTC]

better just in case

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NeuzaKC [2011-11-27 16:38:51 +0000 UTC]



Devious Rating


Vision:

Originality:

Technique:

Impact:


Lack of a Premium Membership isn't going to stop me giving critiques! ;D

Well, this is adorable, of course! I love the candy background, it flows extremely well and it's very colourful, but pastel, so it's not overcrowded with colour. Bonus points because those fat stars are amazing. The attention to detail on the cute cakes and pastries in the background fill the image, but are not distracting.

That pose, although dynamic, has been done before; however, I can't take points from you at all, because it's very well executed. I have to say, quite honestly, that the biggest and only turn-off for me are the hands, or the wrists, more precisely. They feel a bit... Rectangle-ish, if you know what I mean. Unfortunately I have no advice for you. I don't understand hands. ): But there's this, a hands reference by *Pikishi .

I love the slight shading effect you do with the pen, it's marvelous. Anyway, that's all I've got, and good luck with the contest!

Love,
~NeuzaKC


The Artist thought this was FAIR

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xReiichiru In reply to NeuzaKC [2011-11-27 17:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Actually, I thought this was unfair, but hey x)
Gotta say, love the make-shift critique. You should include that header just for lulz x)

Thanks so much about the background! Their always such a pain to create, so I'm glad you like it! pastle just happens with me though OTL. I was hoping the sweeties wouldn't distract, so I only used colouring pencils

Yeah, I got the reference from an anime character on google, so go figure XD I love dynamic poses though, so nice to use one again after so long... x) Though I think the proportions are completely weird. Hadn't thought much about wrists... interesting.
Thanks a bunch for the hands referance! Hands are sooo tricky! I will treasure it forever <3

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NeuzaKC In reply to xReiichiru [2011-11-27 18:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Unfair, you say? Hide all the comments!

I love it, I think you have a real talent for backgrounds, it's amazing. ^^

You're welcome! You know, I feel a little bad telling you that the hands don't look ok when I suck at drawing them myself, I was like "naaaaw, don't tell her" but then fffffffffffffff well anyway, it's not that distracting of an error and yay next time I'll critique for reals! :'D

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xReiichiru In reply to NeuzaKC [2011-11-27 18:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Kawahahaha!!!!

Nah, I apprciate it, otherwise it's not really critique, it's more like cotton candy and I'd half wonder if I can take it seriously o__O'' I think we're friends enough for me to take it and finally, you don't need to be able to draw them yourself to give advise

^rambled x)

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rainbownote [2011-11-27 10:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Aw, it's so cute Reii <3 The colours are really well blended!

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xReiichiru In reply to rainbownote [2011-11-27 10:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Rain-chan! xD
I meant to blend more colours, but then I forgot x__x

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rainbownote In reply to xReiichiru [2011-11-28 05:14:42 +0000 UTC]

xD Its good as it is :3 Pretty and rainbowy ....

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MAD-as-a-HATTER12 [2011-11-26 14:55:03 +0000 UTC]

The colours are soooooo cute!!!

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xReiichiru In reply to MAD-as-a-HATTER12 [2011-11-26 15:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks soo much!!

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