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Withoutwingsx [2013-01-04 02:16:12 +0000 UTC]
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I like the picture! A lot!
One think that came to my attention was authenticity.
I noticed that nehind you, there was a crossing-pole thingy. That red/white striped thing.
Yeah. If you want it to truly look like it is out of No. 6, try to block modern appeals like that.
The whole reflection in the glass was a great idea, and I like how it looked like you were looking through your mirror image, rather than focusing on it. Almost poetic.
The clothes were well done, though I would have added some signs of wear/dirt to try and portray Nezumi, whose clothes would not most likely be so perfect.
Things such as dark marker, a few rips and pulled stiches and some tears would have added more character. The same thing with the yellow sleeve, adding frayed ends and maybe some "dirt" would have added to the scene, though I do not mind the "clean" look either.
Besides that the only thing I would have done differently is rolled up the sleeve once (like a cuff) and added maybe a button to give it a more "jacket" look.
Maybe a bit of color to the lips, such as a natural pink tint, and a bit of bronzer to give the tough and hard'worked exterior that is portrayed throughout the series by Nezumi.
I hope that my critque helped, though in all honesty I didn't see any major problems.
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Withoutwingsx In reply to Withoutwingsx [2013-01-05 00:33:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh, no problem!
I have a thing for photography at the moment, so I'm glad I could help!
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madahope97 [2013-02-03 10:50:54 +0000 UTC]
you look great as Nezumi <3!I love No 6
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Withoutwingsx [2013-01-04 02:08:21 +0000 UTC]
You. Are beautiful.
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xShinjix In reply to Riku-Cosplay [2012-07-03 15:13:41 +0000 UTC]
You're going too? :3 Feel free to come say hi! x3 <3
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Riku-Cosplay In reply to xShinjix [2012-07-03 15:42:07 +0000 UTC]
yes I was there and I definately agree = D, against my oral English level is really bad XDDD
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PurpleTuna [2012-07-02 22:30:50 +0000 UTC]
Owh my gosh !
You are in Paris ?! And going to J.E ?
I will stalk you to the death dear ~ รจ___รฉ ! Hell yeah !
Really nice cosplay ! And you make a beautiful and sexy nezumi <3
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xShinjix In reply to PurpleTuna [2012-07-03 15:14:58 +0000 UTC]
Awh, feel free to come say hi if you can recognize me in my costumes xD
And thanks! ;w; <3
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Yokume [2012-07-02 22:29:18 +0000 UTC]
And when you come back you can have rat shoot *brickd * xDD But yes it does look good all together. I hope you guys have a fun time <3
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