horseygal621 [2012-07-22 02:05:32 +0000 UTC]
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i love this! especially the song e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/>
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I love the whole scene that this is in. I like the way you adjusted the lighting! it looks great, and goes with the lyrics you based it on. I also love the horses eye!! finally, i love the outline you did to the horse. it makes it stand out more, and thats what you want e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/> awesome job on blending the horses hoofs to the grass! if you dont do a good job on that, it ruins the artwork. you did a great job on that!!
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One thing i would work on is the mane/tail. I dont know id you have a tablet, but try using different layer for different lights/darks. it gives it more depth. second, for the white lines you added to the horse, try making it on a new layer, and smudge it lightly to make it smoother. third, the horses shadow. im sure there are some good tuts for shadows, instead of making it one huge blob. Last, i would work on the horse's lighting. since the light source is coming toward the left, make the whole right side of the horse brighter, like you did at the top of the back. the ground lightness doesnt add up to the horse's lightness.
overall, i love it!! its a great piece of artwork e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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