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xsummergirl4235x — Nine Days-Part 1
Published: 2009-01-26 23:07:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 3337; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 5
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Description Garu nervously stood in the middle of the field, for he knew he was in danger.  He peered over his shoulder, knowing that this danger could strike any given second.  He had to watch his back at all times, knowing that if he lacked attention, he could be attacked from any corner.  Luckily, Tobe and his pitiful ninjas were far from this site, but there was something worse than Tobe.  Way  worse.  Something that had stricken fear through Garu's body since the day he had crossed paths with this horrible fear.  This horrible fear was...
"OH GARU!!"
A shadow leered over him and came down right onto his back and started hugging him real tight.  Garu, unable to breathe, tried desperately to free himself, but it was no use.  She was much too strong for him.
"Hi Garu." The voiced exclaimed in a cheerful and somewhat flirty tone.
"Oh, hello Pucca." muttered Garu, still choking in the clutches of this young girl.


"So, Garu, I have a question for you,"
Oh boy, he thought, here it goes; "Do you love me?  Will you be my boyfriend forever and ever?" How am I supposed to answer it? ‘No?’ She’ll go completely ballistic! But if I say yes, I guess I can say goodbye to my training, and my personal space! Well, here it goes.. "Pucca.. I--"
"What do you see in your future?"
Whoa. Not expecting that at all. "F-future??" Garu replied, uneasy.
"Yeah.  Like, what do you picture when you think about yourself about 10 years from now?"
"Umm.. I don't really want to think about that yet."
"Why not?"
"Well, I guess I don't really know what I see in my future.  Lots of fighting, probably.  Possibly a few injuries.  You know, ninja stuff."
"Oh. Is there, anything else? Or anyone?"
Garu thinks for a moment, not seeming to get her hints. "Not that I can think of right now."
"Oh, alright then.  I'll see you.. whenever."
"Yep."
Pucca walks away, and Garu watches her until she completely fades into the sunset.  Then he realized something was up.  She didn't try to kiss him again before she left, and she sort of seemed a bit.. down.  What had he done wrong?
~To be continued
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Comments: 16

Brzozka7777 [2013-04-19 13:55:02 +0000 UTC]

Ok... because of my distraction, I'm reading this now and I'm in the middle of Our time is NOW... genius
But...it doesn't seem to be very long I mean maybe soon I will able to fix my mistake: I'll read this FIRST XD
It looks interesting ^.^

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dveilalice34 [2011-08-20 07:44:41 +0000 UTC]

pucca is acting werid

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SukiR [2010-11-21 06:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Awesome story!

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Love-is-Lost-to-Me [2010-09-22 01:55:21 +0000 UTC]

aw kawaii~! i wish i could get better on the story im helping with on fanfiction .net you hear that reviewers! its not as easy as it looks!

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sdf185 [2009-07-19 20:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh! If you want it off.

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sdf185 [2009-07-19 02:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Well. Its done. Nine days is now on fanficion. I was happy to do it for you. It saved you the time.

Dont worry. I made sure that fokes would know YOU made it. I even left a link to your profile there.

If you want to see nine days on fanficion, click on this: [link]

And ill see you around!

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xsummergirl4235x In reply to sdf185 [2009-07-19 04:06:40 +0000 UTC]

um....
I just signed up for fanfiction, and I was going to post it.
But it's making me wait a day or so, so...
can I do it plz?

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eddxmarie In reply to xsummergirl4235x [2010-07-26 13:50:14 +0000 UTC]

i saw youre you tube vid it is awsome

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sdf185 In reply to xsummergirl4235x [2009-07-19 20:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Okay. You can post it to.

I will take mine off and you can upload yours.

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sdf185 [2009-07-19 01:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Well, i can post it for you. I can even make a link to your profile and all that.

If you want it on fanficion, i can put it in.

All i need is your ok!

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sdf185 [2009-07-16 20:45:41 +0000 UTC]

This is cool!

Your 9TH part got my 5! So i am sure this will be the top of the line on fanfiction.net, if you ever submit it.

I give this a 3 1/2 out of 5!

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xsummergirl4235x In reply to sdf185 [2009-07-16 20:51:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks
I'm thinking about it, and I might join, but its been pretty long and I'm already starting another one (i wrote nine days about 6 months ago )

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sdf185 In reply to xsummergirl4235x [2009-07-16 20:55:34 +0000 UTC]

lol.

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cappy-code [2009-01-28 02:38:22 +0000 UTC]

OMG this is totally good! Y'know... did u ever think about posting this on fan fiction. net? wow... totall 5 stars
this is great so far! :3

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xsummergirl4235x In reply to cappy-code [2009-01-28 03:29:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks! Hmm.. I've never been to fanfiction.net. I'll have to check that out sometime.

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cappy-code In reply to xsummergirl4235x [2009-01-29 23:06:08 +0000 UTC]

I have... I just can't think of any good fan fiction... but I've read a few good ones

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