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xsuperstitionx β€” Midnight Wanderings
Published: 2005-05-19 16:44:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 70; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Midnight Wanderings.

She sat and gazed
With a sorry smile,
She’d sit and wait
For a little while.

She waited there
Until the storm did come,
And blew her away
To where the mockingbirds hum.

She wandered and sang
A beautiful hymn,
How could you put a price
On a light so dim?

The moon did shine
That night, so long,
And so she dreamt
Of a lion, so strong.

In the morn she rose
Out of her deep slumbers,
To the sound of dewdrops
Falling in their numbers.

The point to this poem
So strange, so absurd,
Is between me and the girl,
Who’s name was never heard.
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Comments: 3

bbgurl [2005-05-20 08:56:32 +0000 UTC]

omg this is gud!! seeing as it "just came to your head"!! gud work!! i shall fave!!

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Krianna [2005-05-19 18:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, I think you have a good thing going here, nice imagery and even a bit of sound effects... But honestly, for this poem, I think it could have been a lot better without the cliche rhyme scheme. Oh, and do keep the archaic language, if you want, that is, and you might not even edit it ^_^ But I think it sets the mood for your poem, which I happen to like just how it is...

Okay, I just contradicted myself, and happen to be rambling now... Er... I'll stop... Any minute now... Yup... Just gonna stop typing... >.<

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Angel-tails [2005-05-19 16:51:46 +0000 UTC]

wow i like it lynsich

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