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Published: 2009-07-19 06:28:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 65; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description Meaninglessly Unemployed                       




                           Sand and Grit
                           flung into the
                              hum of a
                            mind set to
                           terminal lucid
                         idle strapped to
                      pet hands counting
                       the other’s fingers
                     while “someone else”
                      stares at a lightbulb
                           till dawn, little
                      black spots cheering
                               them on.
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Comments: 4

Nimbafuu [2009-08-20 06:22:46 +0000 UTC]

I think I've fallen in love with those last 4 or 5 lines, oddly enough. That's my favorite part, I like this very much

I wish I could write in a style like this one, though whenever I try, it comes out completely wrong. I can't get a feel for it I think, I think that's my problem, but I love this! Great Job!

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xXAjaxXx In reply to Nimbafuu [2009-08-21 05:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Heh, not sure what you're referring to, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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YouInventedMe [2009-07-19 08:06:51 +0000 UTC]

wild times are where the wild things are

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xXAjaxXx In reply to YouInventedMe [2009-07-20 04:47:38 +0000 UTC]

A wild thing sounds interesting. While this isn't, it certainly feels like my life story sometimes.

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