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Everything you say to meTakes me one step closer to the edge
And I'm about to break
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Closer
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Comments: 21
This is a very artistic shot. I don't typically go for the emo stuff, but you handled the genre very well. The composition and angles are good, and the pose is very visually interesting. One thing that sets this shot apart from the rest of the genre is that you have a good balance of lights and darks. Too often with alter personality shots, they're very dark, often to the point of barely visible. I find it very interesting that you intentionally overexposed the shot. It adds to the harsh atmosphere of the picture.
I don't really see anything particularly wrong with this shot, but I suppose there is room for improvement. First, I think you should adjust the pose very slightly. I'm not quite sure of what you want your audience to see. Remember that as an artist, you are responsible not only for the correct interpretation of your art, but also for every misinterpretation. Is your subject supposed to be wearing headphones? If so, they're rather difficult to see. You might want to adjust the pose to where the headphones are more visible. Also, you may want to consider changing the saturation of this shot. Not too much, just enough to set it off neutral. You could change it either way; if you want to make it more stark, you should increase the saturation slightly (bear in mind that the shot will become more grainy if you do that). On the other hand, you could also desaturate it slightly to make the overexposure more visible. That's all up to you. Since this is not supposed to be a particularly pleasant shot, the key is in making it as visually interesting as possible.
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I love the emotion in all three of these photos, probably because I've felt that way pleanty of times, but these shots are excellent.
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awesome edit and love the pic
and the lyrics linking park
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Hoooothothot
Great idea. I like the way it says words on either arms.(:
i pretty much made up something to say besides hot but this is like really super hot
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hehe thanks
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You're welcome
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you look a bit like L from death note
but i like it
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Really? Well I've cosplayed as Light before but not as L.
and I'm glad ^-^
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yeah right after my comment i saw it in your gallery nice work
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Hmm, is the last one, by any chance, going to be titled Closer?
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heheh yepp ^^ You got itt.
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Yeah. I wasn't thinking about it when I was taking the pictures but when I was editing them I noticed they reminded me a lot of the song. So I thought it'd make a good title for them.
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Haha, awesome idea!!
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