senwiz [2011-08-06 11:40:34 +0000 UTC]
I really like this. I think that it has a really cool edge to it. However, I would suggest one change. You should rotate one of those becauses. Right now, I read it as, " Don't Cry, it's over, smile because it happened." And I lose the last because. I think that would help clear it up a bit. Even if you don't though, it's still some very nice work here.
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