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dasha-v-m [2009-09-27 18:27:19 +0000 UTC]
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Okay, So I pretty much love this piece. I think that the colors work absolutely wonderfuly together and that you've got a fantastic sense of lighting, something I totally lack (you should write a tutorial e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" /> ) but theres just a few things that i'd like to point out, because i'm bored and have nothing better to do. The first thing is the mane. I'm sort of torn both ways on it. A part of me likes it, because it makes me thing of like..long beach dreads and theres something sort of surreal about its shape. However at the same time, it just looks like it's too much. I think you could make this picture 1000 times better if you make the mane simpler. Also, the tail is sort of blowing to the right, which means theres a wind coming from the left but I don't see the mane being effected by it at all. It looks like it's still and there should be some wind since it's a stormy setting. Another thing that bothers me is the design on the horses hind leg. It looks like it was just scribbled on at the last second and it doesn't look like it's really set in the skin, it just sits on top of it. Everything else looks really good, but I think that if you make the mane and tail simpler and thinner and give it some wind direction, it would look a trillion times better e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
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M-a-x-w-e-l-l [2009-10-05 17:23:37 +0000 UTC]
This is really good. I love the detail on the mane and tail.
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