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peppa-pig22 [2011-02-24 13:32:15 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Since you asked for one,I decided to give you a critique.Please don't get angry at me if I did something wrong,I am new to giving critiques o:.
So let's start with vision.
I love the nice bright colours in here.They are rather lovely and they make the girl stand out quite nicely c;.I also love the whole composition of this.So I believe you did a good job on the vision part! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Thumbs Up"/>.
Next in line is originality.
Now I have to give you here just 3.5 stars,because I honestly see similar photo manipulations all the time.I'm not saying this isn't a good job,but the whole idea of the girl reaching out and being surrounded by sea is rather old and used already.Maybe next time you can mix sea manipulations with something more creative.I can't really help you here,because my ideas would just be funny and rather ridiculous XD. But maybe a bit of work on that.
Now we're coming to technique.
Your photo manipulations are splendid to watch and rather lovely to the eyes,but there is something wrong here.The shadows behind the girl seem to be too fake.I don't know why,but it just seems a bit unnatural,and it's rather easy to see she doesn't really belong there.I'm not that good at photoshop,but maybe if you play around with layers and textures a bit,you could get a lovely and a more natural look.But I have to say that I love the look of the rocks and water.They look like they were painted,and that gives them a certain charm! The sky is rather confusing too,but I believe it works nicely with the general idea.
And now at the last,we have impact.
I absolutely love your artwork.It so bright and when we look behind small mistakes,it's really splendidly done.All of your images always have this mysterious look to them,and I love that a lot.Same goes with this picture.It had a nice impact at me,because you can clearly see the girl reaching out,in sign of hope.Which clearly suggests that this image has a hidden message behind it.But I can't really give you all five stars,because of tiny mistakes :c.Never the less,this is a great piece,and one of my favourites from you.Keep up the great job!
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Art-Lover-Kinomi [2011-02-24 23:48:02 +0000 UTC]
this amazing............ I loved your work
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