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xXJininXx — Not Deserving
Published: 2006-08-05 00:20:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description As I stare through the door flooding with light,
I see your shadow with great delight.

But still I don't deserve to look into eyes as deep as yours,
I don't deserve to touch hair as golden and flowing as yours.

As you walk past without a look nor glance,
I know that I could be your knight, with armor and lance.

But still I don't deserve to have those arms around me,
I don't deserve to have your heart surround me.

As I daydream about you from across the room,
All I can do is feel my heart bloom.
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Comments: 13

Silken-Raider [2006-08-11 08:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Great couplets... I wish I could write like that... but whenever I write about the guy I like, it always makes him seem like the bad guy...

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xXJininXx In reply to Silken-Raider [2006-08-11 08:28:20 +0000 UTC]

Ah it takes practise, keep trying im sure you'll get what you want. you can achivie anyhting if you want

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Silken-Raider In reply to xXJininXx [2006-08-11 08:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah thanks... I'll get it when the time comes, I know it...

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xXJininXx In reply to Silken-Raider [2006-08-11 08:39:21 +0000 UTC]

You can ask me for help anytime if you want ^^

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Silken-Raider In reply to xXJininXx [2006-08-11 08:40:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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xXJininXx In reply to Silken-Raider [2006-08-11 08:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, i need hugs atm

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Silken-Raider In reply to xXJininXx [2006-08-11 09:09:10 +0000 UTC]

Aww, why?

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xXJininXx In reply to Silken-Raider [2006-08-11 09:42:37 +0000 UTC]

just some rough times... you made my day tho <3

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Silken-Raider In reply to xXJininXx [2006-08-11 14:01:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok... Thanks!

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djburnzy [2006-08-06 01:36:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol u cheater liam, u rhymed me with me and your with yours. Good work tho. Very good, looking forward for more

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xXJininXx In reply to djburnzy [2006-08-06 01:38:58 +0000 UTC]

aha cheers ^^

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xXJininXx [2006-08-05 23:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, much appreciated ^^

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SHATZEDESOULO [2006-08-05 01:47:33 +0000 UTC]

wow you are a really great writer, inpired me somewhat to draw the scene.

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