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Published: 2006-11-08 22:13:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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i waste my nights wishing you would change.wishing you would want me.
wishing you would realize how much i care.
i wake up after three hours of sleep.
i can't even open my own eyes-
how can i expect to open yours?
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Comments: 8
I really like it...
Now, translate it to Spanish.
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i agree with charlotte.
last two lines, brilliant.
*mr. g. voice of course*
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i really love the end.
the double meaning, it's great.
i also love how it's short and to the point,
i'm a big fan of that.
one problem though:
the first few lines or so seem like they're just filler lines;
stuff you didn't really mean but just put to take up space until your pow ending.
other than that though,
i really liked it.
you should put more stuff up hereeee.
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you know, i love you.
i'd put more stuff up, but i don't really have much.
and all that stuff was filler. haha.
all morning i was thinking of those last two lines,
then in spanish i was just like......mk. hahaha.
anywhooo thank you :]
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haha no problemmmm
ily.
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