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Published: 2008-09-08 00:44:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description Oooh, Madness, I love madness.
     Why?! Why are you doing this to me?

Because it's madness! I love madness!
     No! Please! Don't come any closer!

But its fu-un!
     Spare me please! Don't kill me!

Again with the begging, it happens every time. Do you value your life that much?
     I've got children!

Do you really think I care? Why would anyone care? Why would I care?
     Oh my god! Help me!

Please, just shut up. Sometimes I feel knives can only kill so fast.
     Please, please tell me this is a bad dream! Someone..anyone..

Ahh, my favorite part! The dramatic death!
     My god, I'm really going to die...

Why yes you are!
     ....

I win! Hooray!

I love this game! It's soooo much fun! Tracking, killing, making a person paranoid! It's sooo delicious!

Watching the light in their eyes die out,
          Gently setting the body down, he pulled his knife out of her chest.

Watching their skin, turn to a deathly pale color,
          He wiped the blood of his hands in the grass nearby.

Watching them twitch once or twice before they succumb to their fate,
          With a chuckle, he walked away, leaving the still body behind

Why do I do this?
          He slowly raised one hand, and licked a bit of left over blood off his thumb

                                         --It's delicious.--
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Comments: 11

GabbyKeehl [2008-09-14 22:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow. ermm.. that's dark. :]
But I love it! lol

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XxJustPassingByxX In reply to GabbyKeehl [2008-09-15 18:44:20 +0000 UTC]

I had another darkness spasm XDD

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GabbyKeehl In reply to XxJustPassingByxX [2008-09-15 21:44:51 +0000 UTC]

I noticed... >.>

But still I love it! We were talking about dark stories today at school and I told them about yours and they were like woahhh! lol

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XxJustPassingByxX In reply to GabbyKeehl [2008-09-15 22:37:26 +0000 UTC]

you showed them mine?

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GabbyKeehl In reply to XxJustPassingByxX [2008-09-16 01:07:07 +0000 UTC]

well i told them all about it. :]
They said it sounds awesome and i think i'm gonna print some of your works like that out for them. :]
if it's okay with you.. lol

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XxJustPassingByxX In reply to GabbyKeehl [2008-09-16 01:13:38 +0000 UTC]

yeah ^.^ its totally fine

i love when ppl read my works!

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GabbyKeehl In reply to XxJustPassingByxX [2008-09-16 15:41:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay! ^-^ lol

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SephirothThePure [2008-09-08 04:49:03 +0000 UTC]

Woah. That's...unexpected to say the least. It's very well written. A little gruesome, but meh. And as long as it's poetry, it can be submitted. So, voila, entry numbah two.

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XxJustPassingByxX In reply to SephirothThePure [2008-09-08 04:53:25 +0000 UTC]

I have my moments of gruesomeness lol >.>

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SephirothThePure In reply to XxJustPassingByxX [2008-09-08 04:59:12 +0000 UTC]

don't we all?

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XxJustPassingByxX In reply to SephirothThePure [2008-09-09 01:16:01 +0000 UTC]

indeed hehe

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