Comments: 899
jojo-123 [2017-07-04 21:33:28 +0000 UTC]
I love this! Amazing job!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
itzme332 [2014-11-27 20:43:17 +0000 UTC]
I had thought about going Anorexic. I dropped the idea though. its funny how when I look in a mirror that's almost exactly what i'll say to myself.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
rjcat17 [2013-01-12 20:37:59 +0000 UTC]
Those words are sooo true...im in a battle with ana right now..very nice work..
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Thelene [2012-12-19 22:59:33 +0000 UTC]
sad, but i kinda laughed. It's true, it had it coming! x'33
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
AlissaHill24 [2012-11-11 22:52:32 +0000 UTC]
story of my life....
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
ilovellis [2012-11-05 01:48:58 +0000 UTC]
wow, this really relates to me
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Sarahlowe97 [2012-07-21 23:20:49 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing i love the emotion in this it is so powerful
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Katie-Venerelli [2012-07-20 05:36:40 +0000 UTC]
I've smashed so many mirrors, and this will go through my mind for the rest of them, thanks for the poem to sing aloud with it
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
tobycow [2012-06-16 20:45:10 +0000 UTC]
That was amazing ; ~ ;
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Shining-Galaxy [2012-05-22 00:43:10 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that was amazing! Excellent job!!
Very emotive I believe
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
QUIETbrent [2012-03-25 20:54:22 +0000 UTC]
Perfect ending to the poem. Doesn't just display anorexia, but a moment in time only the person who punched the mirror would understand. Very talented. Nothing can stop your talent.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
DR14 [2012-03-23 01:00:57 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! It was a little depressing, and Im far from an anorexic, so i can only kind of relate, but i could still feel all of the emotion!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
SerenityFyre13 [2012-03-19 05:20:55 +0000 UTC]
I have to say...you have it right..
I LOVE this poem..it's excellent. X3
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
mynameiskassidi [2012-03-11 02:00:41 +0000 UTC]
i cant breathe now.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
krstnpaul [2012-03-02 11:41:18 +0000 UTC]
nothing else to say but, this is life, wow.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
novelist888 [2012-02-28 07:46:58 +0000 UTC]
Love your work!!!
This is my website [link] Check it out!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
OneiricOther [2012-02-22 10:29:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that is really good. really accurate and realistic too, like its not decorated with pretty metaphors, and yet its not raw.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Mika-Ryoko [2012-02-02 03:01:41 +0000 UTC]
Your poem shows how anorexa (or any eating disorder) affects the mind.
I like the way you end it, it is rather ambigious as to if the reflection shattered the mirror to stop the disorder, or if it is to hide the truth from themself.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
blackmilkshake [2011-12-28 22:51:50 +0000 UTC]
This is so good!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
| Next =>