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Published: 2009-11-16 10:56:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 213; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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crouching upon a barren icebergshe demanded, with
faithful harp seal eyes and
taut lips -
as she was too
terrified of her own creaky
voice
to leap from her
tongue like a tiger
from an open
cage,
might her jaw
drop,
whether I would recoil
from her stinging touch;
unexpectedly,
her burning paws
melting my ice arms as
she strove to caress me,
chasing after my
frightened ashes as I
slunk into the ocean,
guiltily seeping into
a city of regretful
ghosts of ice men
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Comments: 2
This is amazing. I love how visual this is, it's beautiful. I especially love
"terrified of her own creaky
voice
to leap from her
tongue like a tiger
from an open
cage,"
It's so visual and powerful. Great job with this one.
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Thank you so much!
this is the first feedback I've gotten on it, haha. I'm so glad you liked it!
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