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xXNightRose14Xx — Through The Hour Glass by-nc-nd
Published: 2011-02-27 07:53:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 478; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 1
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Description As I see her go through the pain and suffering.
I watch her,
Through the hour glass.

I am stuck.
Thick glass separating me and her.
The sand steadly falling.

I see what she goes through.
I see the sorrow.

She does not tell me.
Not even tomorrow.

I can see.
I can't hear.
Sand falling steadily.

She won't tell me.
I can't hear anything.

The sand becomes thicker.
The pain never went away.

With the last tears. (That I s a w)

Why couldn't you tell

me?

I thought through the hour glass.

The sand almost gone.

I cannot see.

I cannot hear.

I couldn't do anything.

To help her.
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Comments: 20

plginbby [2011-02-28 05:23:34 +0000 UTC]

I like this little bit, it gives me the feeling of being rendered useless by and over time.
And it makes me think of Aladin (:

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xXNightRose14Xx In reply to plginbby [2011-02-28 06:29:50 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha thank you!
This poem really reminds people of things

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athenaaqua [2011-02-28 04:53:48 +0000 UTC]

You tried.

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xXNightRose14Xx In reply to athenaaqua [2011-02-28 06:29:25 +0000 UTC]

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zamiel-meison [2011-02-28 03:07:07 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, deep... nostalgic too D: it made me sad imagining the scene, and i couldnt help but relating it to Tsubasa Chronicles great work again!!

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xXNightRose14Xx In reply to zamiel-meison [2011-02-28 04:28:16 +0000 UTC]

What does nostalgic mean? o.o
Oh I didn't think about tsubasa! that is very true though, oh wow o.o
Thank you so much!

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zamiel-meison In reply to xXNightRose14Xx [2011-03-01 02:30:24 +0000 UTC]

nostalgic... mmmm like melancholyc... that you miss something that once was and you see the present sad, or you are sad for not doing something in the past... or sort of

No problem!!!

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Angelbydeath [2011-02-27 19:31:52 +0000 UTC]

<---- my mind right now.... beautiful my love, simply beautiful

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xXNightRose14Xx In reply to Angelbydeath [2011-02-28 00:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank youuu
No crying

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Angelbydeath In reply to xXNightRose14Xx [2011-02-28 01:18:06 +0000 UTC]

^^ yush yush

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GJPen [2011-02-27 17:51:00 +0000 UTC]

very sad but beautiful at the same time :C
I like the visuals that you created through narration. <3

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xXNightRose14Xx In reply to GJPen [2011-02-27 18:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Aww! Thank you
Just kinda came to me

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InkyStars [2011-02-27 15:57:02 +0000 UTC]

I really like this.
It's really sad when all you can do is stand on the sidelines. (And sometimes you wish you could rewrite the past?) At least, that's how I interpreted the piece. I don't know...

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xXNightRose14Xx In reply to InkyStars [2011-02-27 18:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha true true
Thank you

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Rosii-chan [2011-02-27 08:05:47 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, I'm sorry but... *through... It just totally changes the meaning >__< Sorry!

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xXNightRose14Xx In reply to Rosii-chan [2011-02-27 08:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Naw its alright, I'm sleep deprived at the moment

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Rosii-chan In reply to xXNightRose14Xx [2011-02-27 23:19:45 +0000 UTC]

Aw... sleep deprivation suckss...

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