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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to Nek0kawaii [2012-03-02 00:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-07 11:48:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. xD

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-07 13:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Welcome you sure are good

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-07 22:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Good? This drawing sucks. o-o

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-08 06:14:23 +0000 UTC]

my sucks even worse belive em go and watch mine

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-08 12:40:40 +0000 UTC]

I can't insult you...that's rude. D:

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-08 14:59:32 +0000 UTC]

¨hm i know still read my story i writed pleas read it and say what you think

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-08 22:57:19 +0000 UTC]

I can't read it. :/

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-09 06:20:08 +0000 UTC]

to bad well try abnyway

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-09 12:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Just work on your grammar, work on your sentences, punctuation, etc.
You wrote a lot of things by the wrong verbs and stuff, it just needs a few more changes. Then you had strange sentence structure.

It really didn't keep my attention, it didn't have something to draw me in. My teachers tell me that's the thing; when you start a story- you have to draw them in.

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-09 13:09:00 +0000 UTC]

well im good at englsih but im not good on writing long storys on englsih but i got a idea i gonna have my BF to corect my typos

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-09 13:11:04 +0000 UTC]

It's alright. Practive makes perfect.
I'm sure you'll write a great story some day. ^^

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-09 18:18:15 +0000 UTC]

i tried to corect the errors i hope it worked and that its better

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-09 19:50:49 +0000 UTC]

That DarkSonic person had pretty good points.

It's alright though, it's your first try! I know my first try- it was horrible. xD My first language wasn't English, so I understand. It's pretty hard to learn a few languages- but English came pretty easily to me.

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-10 06:10:32 +0000 UTC]

well unlike you im from Finland i talk english and spell english correct but its hard to write a story on english

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-10 12:52:28 +0000 UTC]

It's alright, I understand.

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-10 12:59:54 +0000 UTC]

hmm its ok XD I tried to corect the errors but im not sure how it went
out and another thing i writed the story 1 am

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-10 13:27:57 +0000 UTC]

It's alright, I'm sure peoople would like it. ^^

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-10 13:34:02 +0000 UTC]

hmm maby but i tried to corect errors and darksonic said it was good so pleas put up a kind coment pleas

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-11 00:15:27 +0000 UTC]

I honestly don't have a kind comment. I never read original stories- they irk me a lot, I dislike originals unless they're really good and interesting. I can't be mean to people because it's rude.

But you can't just ask someone to post a nice comment. D: I feel like you're just trying to milk me out, it's very rude to me when people ask like that. It is alright, and I think you can do great.

Practice makes Perfect. <3

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-11 07:11:43 +0000 UTC]

i would NEVER milk you out what ever that means XD well i just put up the nice coments coz many peoples do that but i can stop with it im good at taking things so no neesd to lie i can take the truth
~why is it always hapening to me~

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-11 14:48:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, darling. But, it should be easier if you stick to your own language- and once you've managed to actually learn enough english to write down a nice, good ol' story, you should be fine. ^^

At least, that's what I did.

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-11 15:43:03 +0000 UTC]

well thanx for your advice but i wont folow it sorry ^^ my friends suports me and tells me its going better an dbetter for everytime btw my BF is english and he promised to rwad it and corect my errors on paart 2 of the story

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-11 15:49:32 +0000 UTC]

It's alright. ^^

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-11 15:55:43 +0000 UTC]

sigh i draw a knuckles drawing

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-11 16:04:16 +0000 UTC]

A what? ...Your hand? Like the knuckles?

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-11 16:09:24 +0000 UTC]

im puttin gup pics i draw some Sonic characters look at them

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-11 16:13:19 +0000 UTC]

I don't really like sonic, but I have a friend who does. But I think she's into something else now...not sure.

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-11 16:20:45 +0000 UTC]

OK well we are all diffrent you want ,me to try to draw a joker pic

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to darkfary93 [2011-11-11 16:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Joker? I don't care, it's your choice, not mine.

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darkfary93 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-11-12 09:01:20 +0000 UTC]

okok

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to gummy321 [2011-04-16 20:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah, Thank you~!

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gummy321 In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-04-17 14:20:59 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome~! ♥

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to WolfieStarr [2011-02-07 21:37:40 +0000 UTC]

oh thanks~ xD I had trouble wth them too...just take a lot of tutorials and you'll get better

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WolfieStarr In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-02-08 02:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thanks!

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to xGhostwriterx [2011-01-02 02:41:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks <3

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to QueenOfKnights [2010-12-30 04:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! EVERYONE SHOULD LOVE IT.

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QueenOfKnights In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-01-01 05:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Welcome! And yes everyone should!(agh...sorry my english is... kinda... bad >.<)

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to QueenOfKnights [2011-01-01 05:10:40 +0000 UTC]

well...I speak more languages than one? xD You don't have to talk in english D: but yes, ameripan is teh smex

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QueenOfKnights In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-01-05 02:32:57 +0000 UTC]

Well i only can speak english and spanish TvT And yeah i agree with you >w< They both look sooo good together!

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xXrSoOxRaAsXx In reply to QueenOfKnights [2011-01-05 02:43:50 +0000 UTC]

luls yeah. Well if you want I can talk in Spanish I feel kinda bad...>.< and I has to go to bed. Dammit. I hate school Dx

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QueenOfKnights In reply to xXrSoOxRaAsXx [2011-01-08 01:31:04 +0000 UTC]

aghh sorry for responding this late ;-; Well if that does not disturb you ^///^ I hate school also <_< Hope your feeling fine right now >.👍: 0 ⏩: 1