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XxSafetyPinsxX — A Midnight Rendezvous
Published: 2010-10-24 22:43:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 402; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 8
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the rain drops decorate the windowas she rests a hand against the cold pane
- memories so long forgotten
the shadows cross the rooms
as she shrinks among their hold
- wishing them away
the creaks in the floor boards wake the house
as she slips out the door
- a ghost in the storm
the leafs dance in the grasping wind
as she spots him standing in the park
- a phantom heartbeat in her chest
the fog permeates the air
and she caresses his cheek with a cold touch
- tears fall down her cheeks
the tower clock chimes twelve times; midnight
and they imagine themselves in each other's arms
- specter and human
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Comments: 6
Sounds like some crazy expert of a weird romance-y novel with a ghost? Or a novel about the feeling of a breakup/death of boyfriend.
I like it, it seems different then some of your stuffs. Which is always fun to see.
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WAhhh.
Sorry. I was totally not paying attention to where you commented. XD And totally thought this was somewhere else. xD
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lolololololololololol.
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You've got the beginnings of something great here! I won't say it's perfect, but it's quite impressive. I love the imagery, and the words really flow well! Check out Scarlet Letter's [link] work. Some of it is kind of hard to read, but there are more than a few that I really love that you're style reminds me of. Anyway, I'd really like to see you do some more!!
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Thank you very much. It started out as an experiment, and I really did start to like it. There are things that bother me about it, but an artist is most critical about their own work. There's quite the possibility that I'll re-work some of it. Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate it!
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