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RJBG [2015-02-17 19:02:30 +0000 UTC]
Great!
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skyeyedangel [2014-11-09 12:40:35 +0000 UTC]
so beautiful
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msdonnad [2014-05-06 04:07:04 +0000 UTC]
awesome content, and outstanding rhyme scheme
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Nihil-Invictus [2014-05-01 06:39:21 +0000 UTC]
There is love. And then it disappears...like everything else. :\
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rainbowNinja659 [2014-05-01 06:27:09 +0000 UTC]
This is a beautiful work of art! I do not believe that anyone could recreate this and have it be the same, for it an exquisite piece of poetry. Well done!
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soulspoken [2014-05-01 06:17:08 +0000 UTC]
It's important to remember the lesson of those last lines. Thank you for writing them out for others to see.
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wallawallaw [2014-05-01 05:57:57 +0000 UTC]
and love easily can become madness
wonderful poem
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