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xyxtlin — Akane no natsuyasumi
Published: 2004-06-29 07:05:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 23084; Favourites: 187; Downloads: 1667
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Summer themed pic to replace my Winter title pic. Another pic of Akane. Plenty of background problems (Still need work on that) but I'm generally ok with out it turned out.I don't feel like looking for problems right now, I'll probably do that tomorrow.
~xyxtlin
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Always now a day fat girls are really attractive!!
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<.<
Not sure I'm arguing against that really...
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I think I fell in love with her. xyxtlin could you please draw more of her in a bikini.
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Thanks for your feedback! ^^
~xyxltin
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It's great to see people who apperciate a normal looking girl 
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Thanks for your comments
I hope to do better in the future.
~xyxtlin
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My now EX-girlfriend, was on my account and posted some dumb comments, the password is changed.
I would prefer to wait for the picture's completion before critiquing, I like your style though, and the funky hair. Thanks.
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Completion? I highly doubt I'll be doing much more to it.
~xyxtlin
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Do you find fatchicks sexy? No offence to any of y'all. Just wondering cuz you draw alot of overweight manga. Thanks.
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O_o
I'm not sure how that was necessary.
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ROFL!!!!!! Nice picture, I agree with those who are glad to see something different with anime, but I'm still afraid to go to the beach.
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ah I see
Well I'm glad you found some perspective to enjoy it from.
~xyxtlin
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That reminds me of someone... ::looks down:: Hehehe... Nevermind...
Anyways... 
Like I said, though... You did an excellent job with the proportions of the body... I don't see that much wrong with the coloring and shading, but that may be because I'm not one to use color... ::sweat-drop:: Anyway, I'm always happy to see healthy women in art today... 
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Thanks for the feedback.
Chubby girls in anime may be rare, but that doesn't mean we have to draw them all that way
~xyxtlin
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Excellent job on the cute factor, it really looks like she's walking toward me! (I wish)
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hmm...background looks aight to me...course, my background skill suxorz..lol
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heh, thanks (I still need work though, lol)
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Agreed, more people should draw her.
~xyxtlin
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Looks like she's walking with a sashay. Very very cute.
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well one leg is behind the other... I guess that pose still needs work.
~xyxtlin
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Mmmmmmmmmm nice.........oh! uhm hehe uhm...nice work!
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Yes! More art by the mighty Xyxtlin! It looks really great! And she's got nice thighs!
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looks great man, i can't see anyhting wrong with the pic that hasn't been mentioned.
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It's a little hard to see that first shade used for shading on Akane's skin, so I really can't check for any lighting errors. One thing that struck me odd was how she was standing in respect to the body shadow cast. Her right leg is behind the other, but is it bent at the knee in mid step? Despite what position this leg is in, her cast shadow doesn't reflect that. The palm tree also has no casted shadow. The rocks were all ready mentioned, and aside from adding a few beach goers on towels in the bg for added interest, that's I'll I can spot.
Otherwise, Akane looks quite plump and quite
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lol, yep. That's because I did a cheap "drop" shadow... which only represents the 2D image that's there... I didn't feel like doing that for the wall or the tree... I'll have to think more about these things in the future. As always though, the background is nealy always my lowest priority.
~xyxtlin
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Muy bueno!
Akane looks so much better when shes fat. Don't you agree?
Two things about the picture, however:
One: The stone wall behind her doesn't have a definite border, so it looks as if its blending into the sand.
Two: The tone of the water in the back is kinda grey. Like if a storm was coming over it.
Other than that, I like it!
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Hai.
Yep that stone wall is kinda flat (gomen). Stormy water? Ah well, guess I still need more practice.
~xyxtlin
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yep, I've got a long way to go with backgrounds.
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I like this!
Glad to see people are escaping from the Anerexia that fills anime.
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lol, thanks for the comment,
~xyxtlin
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