HOME | DD

Mellaa [2012-01-26 21:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

Sooooo this is now a critique. :,)

I would use a bit more and darker shade on the hair. You didn't use that much shade. It would look better in my opinion.
And there is only one thing that I don't like that much about the animation. It's just the fact that the eye should be closed a bit longer and then after maybe ten seconds more it should open.
The animation is really smooth I like that!

The proportions are done really well, but the girls breast is a bit too "sharp". (I hope you know what I mean)
The scenario itself is so freaking cute. I really like it. (:

I hope this helped. ^^

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

hurtroad [2012-01-26 21:21:33 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

I really like the details in the shirts and the background and eyes,but I think you need to put a little more detail in the hair,shade a bit and lightin a bit..... The male's apearance is good,but since his arms are unseen,it kind of looks like he is on his hands and knees and is somehow taller than her,which gives it an oddish look,if that is how you wanted it,it's nice e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Also during the animation of the eye opening there is a black line that lasts for a while,I'm not sure if it is just my computer glitching or what but unless you have good eyes it's a bit hard to catch.....I hope this helps you e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

parwana [2012-02-12 15:13:38 +0000 UTC]

this is also really cute! well done!

featured here: [link]

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Lionsmoon [2012-02-05 16:47:56 +0000 UTC]

God! I love this! It's so darn cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute! And I love how her eye is blinking XD Very nice animation! :3

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

spiritjujuhari [2012-02-01 10:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Aw very cute

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Tishawish [2012-01-26 22:37:14 +0000 UTC]

How cute(; I'd like to try animating soon too.
If there are a few things that could be improved on, it would be the shape of their hair/head(?) and the shading. The way their hairs are placed make their head shapes a little weird. I also think that adding a more prominent or detailed shading would've made this a lot better!
I think the movement of the eye was done fairly well but maybe the eyebrows should've been animated too(x
Of course, that's just my 2cents.
Hopefully, your next animation would be even greater than this

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FixinMix [2012-01-26 22:02:37 +0000 UTC]

Het is Really awesome I Love it ^^-

The shading is awesome
But,
No, No but,
THERE CUTE

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

PieEqualsGood22 [2012-01-26 21:50:11 +0000 UTC]

Aww~! ;w;
I think this pic is adorablee, and the animation is really well done! I love the girl's design on her shirt, and the boy's shirt is really well done, too!
However, just to make it stand out more, you might want to add more detailed shading in future drawings, more darker colors, and highlights. also this is just my opinion, I think the animation is really good, but isn't it kind of creepy to open your eyes when you're kissing someone...? orz Just my opinion though... >//<

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

NynjaKat [2012-01-26 21:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Aw, how cute. It's very nice and I like the animation. Maybe you can make eyebrow moving too,
cause those move you someone blinks. Just a suggestion.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Pagiechan [2012-01-26 21:40:36 +0000 UTC]

aww this is really cute and the wrinkles on his shirt are really well done. The guy turned out really well but i think it might be his hair that made the foreheads look weird a bit. Maybe if you brought out the girls hair a bit more it could fix that and maybe smooth out her hair a bit because i notice little points. other than that it's really well done and a great side view.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

aizenxhagane [2012-01-26 21:28:58 +0000 UTC]

This is very beautiful i love her shirt and how she is looks like she is suprized and then not anymore (sorry if it doesn't make sense.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

charmgal27 [2012-01-22 20:35:51 +0000 UTC]

oh gosh too cute :'D

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

moonlit-flower-petal [2012-01-22 18:24:03 +0000 UTC]

It's so amazing and I love it to death!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

IKalsada [2011-12-10 14:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, Yo~

Yung sinasabi kong papaturo, sige decide ka lang.

Ngayon, gusto ko kasi gumawa ng story para sa Christmas. So, pwede ko ba ito pag basehan? Wag ka mag-alala lalagyan ko ng credits.

Pwede?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

xxDevilsAngel28xx [2011-12-07 08:03:12 +0000 UTC]

This is so KAWAIII!!!!!
Anong ginamit mo sa animation?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

K-o-joesgirl [2011-12-06 06:52:23 +0000 UTC]

I love it!!!! so cute

👍: 0 ⏩: 1