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Published: 2009-12-03 17:04:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 3846; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 107
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European comic format is very different form American formats, so I made a new layout file and I decided to test it out with a one page comic. Because my main audience with Nightingale will be Europeans, I wanted to try it out in French with a font that supported accents, just to see how it worked. The dialogue came out a bit cramped, but... that's always what happens when you let Charlotte be in a comic. PUTAIN!!Related content
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Ahaha, I'm in 3rd year French, so I could understand a little of this XD
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Just randomly stubbled on this page of your and I'm curious to know where you were/are in your Nightingale comics?
have you done some, in french too? Are you published?
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"Nightingale" is still in concept, the scripts aren't written yet. They aren't published.
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I'm learning french and I could understand all of this.
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Your french is pretty good. French being my first language, Would bing If I pointed out the small mistakes? I've seen some of them being made by native french speakers too, anyway.
And I look forward Nightingale♥
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I don't mind if you correct the mistakes, be my guest!
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Okay, then (And now in french, for the sake of it and because I'm way more fluent):
Dans la deuxième case, il faudrait que ce soit : "Ça se voit". La différence entre Ce et Se est une erreur vraiment commune, que même moi en tant que "nazi de la grammaire", je fais parfois (en pleurant des larmes de sang après, par contre)XD;.
Dans la troisième case, Fonte devrait être au féminin, donc cette et non pas ce. J'aurais peut-être choisi inutile au lieu de nul, si je peux me permettre.
Quatrième case, "où" prend un accent, parce que ça décrit un lieu et non pas un choix (ce n'est pas X ou y, par exemple. Je ne sais pas si tu vois ce que je veux dire?)
Cinquième case, caméra est un nom féminin, alors ça serait "la caméra"
Cinquième case, le "Désormais" me dérange un peu, je crois que le terme n'a pas sa place là. Et "tu peux" se finit par un x.
Et J'adore la sixième case. XD
Merci beaucoup de l'attention, J'espère que je ne suis pas désagréable ou quoi que ce soit. J'aime vraiment ce que tu fais, c'est vraiment un style qui t'est propre, à mon avis.
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Thanks for the long explanation! If this ever goes into print (which will be in at least a year) I'll make sure to correct it.
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You're welcomed! By the way, since you're in Belgium now, do you often speak french?
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I don't speak French much. Actually, I don't get out of my house much! It's hard to make friends here, since I don't have any classes or excuses to meet people. I've lived here a year now and I still don't have anyone to hang out with.
Also, I find it really difficult to speak French with locals here, because they aren't very sensitive to the fact that French is not my first language. XD; They never speak slower for me or use easier words, so it often discourages me from trying at all. Most of the few friends I have here are either Italian, American, or Flemish. For some reason, Flemish people are all really fluent in English, which makes them a lot easier to talk to. XD;
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I see. Maybe it's... kind of respect? Like, they try to treats you just like anyone else. Anyway, it's still disagreeable. But it you ever need to practice your written French, I'm here? |D (Plus it's not French from France, it's French Canadian. Which include lots of variations)
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Tu parle vraiment bien français! Il y a quelques petites fautes mais on comprend très bien!!!
Je pourrais donc laisser des commentaires en français!
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J'ai eu un peu d'aide avec le grammaire! Mais bien sür, c'est bien si tu fais commentaires en Français! C'est bien pour moi aussi, je dois pratiquer! XD
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Ok! Alors tu va avoir de l'entrainement!!!!
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Then look at the English version.
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But are you going to do most of them in French or English?
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I'll do them in English first, since it's my best language, but the comic will be geared more to a European audience, so I want to make sure it looks OK in French.
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Hello, si tu veux de l'aide pour la traduction en français je peux t'aider
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Merci! Je vous ecriverais quand j'ai quelque chose a traduire. XD;
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Yay I don't hvae to learn French. XD
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XD i just read it aloud in french and i had a blast this BD would be WICKED fun to watch as a cartoon!
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Hahaha I read it aloud while I was writing it, too! I love reading comics aloud when they have fun dialogue. <3 Thanks!
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C'est fantastique! Je suis dans mon cours de français au lycée, et j'aime lire des BDs en français.
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Je l'aime tellement! C'est chouette, je pense! 
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Oui, je l'ai etudié pour 6 ans. Et maintenent j'habite en Belge, alors je l'enetend souvent.
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Ahh, je suis trop jaloux! Je l'ai etudié pour seulement UN an! C'est maintenant mon 2er anée... J'adore parler en français! Je ne sais exactement pourquoi... Ma classe ne sait beaucoup pas du tout! D:
Mais je pense que parler en français est tellement amusant... Tu as de la chance!!
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Oui, c'est bien que tu fais d'excercises! J'ai un suggestion, tu devrais lire des bandes-dessineés en Français. On apprend vite, puisque ils sont tres amusant!
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Bandes-dessineés? Qu'est-ce que c'est? S'il est marcher bien, je vais le chercher! Merci pour l'idée!
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Bandes-dessinees= comics. (Literally, "drawn strips.") XD Often shortened to just "BD."
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...Oh. XD I was hoping you were suggesting like. A certain comic. Oh well.
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There are literally THOUSANDS to choose from... I don't know what you'd like best. But whatever your preference, it's sure to be out there. I'm not actually that well-versed in them yet myself, but if you tell me what you like, I can try to offer some suggestions.
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Hmmm, well. I dunno, like genres? I'm not sure what I like if that's what you mean.. just fun.. stuff? Sacralicious webcomics? ;D
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Sœur Marie-Thérèse des Batignolles.
This is the comic for you.
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XD Oh my goshhh, is that a real comic?
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I love the internet :'D
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Je l'entends
En tout cas, je ne peux que t'encourager pour ce projet. J'aime beaucoup ton style réaliste.
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If you look at this version and the English version side-by-side, you'll learn a bit. ;D
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oh mon dieu! je peux lie en francaise! (but i cant spell it lol.)
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Even though I've forgotten almost everything of my basic French, I can still somewhat understand this 
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