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lovableto [2020-09-16 18:54:58 +0000 UTC]
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Mortar-Well [2016-09-05 22:19:29 +0000 UTC]
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Gorgeous choice of colors, patterns, and textures. This gives off an elegant yet sinister vibe for Teto and Luka, and an even more pure and innocent reflection for Miku. I'd definitely recommend these for creators looking to add a special flair to their videos/works!
As for critique, I feel like this kind of model has been done many times. Elegant dresses, frilly lace, high heels, etc. It doesn't retract from the beauty at all, but I do feel like this concept of Passion, Dark, Light could have been farther expanded upon. Maybe add some more symbolic variation between the three?
Either way, this is a lovely trio of models that I will definitely be looking forward to using in the future!
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fanartiquess [2016-08-18 02:37:18 +0000 UTC]
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For vision, it's very good. However, the dresses are very similar in design, and I would normally like to see some difference in the dresses design. But, I'll let this detail slide for now. It might come back to haunt you in the impact. *laugh* Also, the gloves are different on the short dress models and it bugs me but I'll let this slide also.
For originality, I think this is very original. For dress models, lace isn't very common, and neither are gloves. Making short dress versions is a clever idea.
For technique, I think the models were made well. However, it could be a little less glitchy. And there could be a Null_00 bone, which moves the whole model. But making up for not having a bone moving the whole model, a bone moves the feet so you can essentially move the whole model. (On the long dress model of Luka.)
For impact, I am very interested in these models. But if I was somebody who wasn't interested in MMD, I wouldn't be interested, unlike some other MMD models, which I could see myself being interested in no matter what.
Overall:13 stars. These models are very good. But they could improve a lot in some aspects.
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TheCuriousFeline626 [2016-04-24 04:18:30 +0000 UTC]
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The detail is phenomenal. I'm very impressed with how they turned out in the long run. I've actually seen this really good video of Teto. It was a Corpse Party video, and her physics looked very well tamed. Also, once effects are added, she looks absolutely gorgeous. Of course, let's not forget Miku and Luka! I really like the design on the dresses, too. They look unique in their own way. The only thing that I would probably say that could be better was if maybe each girl had their own unique style of dress, rather than with just different colors. But, there's the challenge of pulling that off.
You've created some very nice models. They're all very pretty, as well as sophisticated in their own right. Very nice job! I hope that my critique helped you! As I'm sure you know, this is only my opinion. It's okay if you disagree, as well as anyone else who reads this. As long as you're happy with them, then I am happy.
~The Curious Feline
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highesteverafter [2016-01-17 23:37:42 +0000 UTC]
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The vision is so good, the atmosphere is pretty cool too, so 4/5 stars
I say that the originality is okay, pretty nice, but so much users do the same, so 3/4 stars.
Technique, cuteeee!!!, but i don´t like so much the hair of miku, but i think is a nice hair for light. So 4 stars.
Impacted, i am IMPACTED on the models. You do a really cute,beautiful,impressive and amazing work. I love your models so much so... ¿why not five stars for the impact? i need to say 5 stars for your beautiful models.
I really can´t say no to fauvorites.
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AngelicPrincess653 [2015-09-27 19:28:57 +0000 UTC]
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I really truly admire the work put into these models. There's a lot of detail on the outfits. The knee-highs look really amazing, like real fabric. The same goes for the dresses too. I mean, the detail is phenomenal. You really have an eye for texture. Plus, the physics are amazing on these models. One thing that really stands out for me, though, is the style of the dresses. What I mean is that one is given two different versions of the models, ones with long dresses and ones with short dresses. Some people may prefer the shorter version, while others the longer version.
I also like the color scheme chosen. You can just tell what type of character which girl is based on appearance and color. The color makes each dress look slightly different from each other. One other thing, love the accessories. I really love how the longer dress models have the crowns and tiaras, while the shorter versions do not. It's like they could go to a ball or something in their long gowns, or go on a night "on the scene" in their shorter dresses. Overall, you did a fantastic job!
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Rain-Splash-pony [2014-03-29 14:54:18 +0000 UTC]
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Hmm... This is a very nice piece overall, but could do with a bit more inventiveness. To be quite honest, the characters look, well, like the same girl with different eye color, hair, and dress. Maybe you could have made the features, body type, and height slightly different for each? I'm not saying to draw exaggerated differences, but subtle changes can go a long way in making characters look realistic and individual.
Also, the dresses are all beautiful, but they, too, could use a bit more creativity. Maybe slightly different patterns for the three dresses? Or maybe a few more hues? For instance, you could have made Light's dress with a very pale, iridescent blue overlay, or Passion's dress with hot pink hems?
However, aside from this bit of nitpicking, it is a nice work. The anatomy and poses are done nicely, as is the shading and detailing on the dresses. And the lingerie is quite well done, also. Good job! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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whole-wheat [2014-03-29 00:58:28 +0000 UTC]
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I think you did a very good job, but there is always room for improvement!
For Vision, I think you really had a good goal here. There are two different outfits, with a color to each match the vocaloids. I believe you were aiming for them to each represent something, which you can kind of tell by their poses, which I found interesting.
For Originality, I'm not really sure if it's all completely original. To me, it reminds me a lot of your daughter of evil rin, and just a retexture of (Agahat?)'s luka. The textures are definitely an improvement, but it's nothing that hasn't been done before. It doesn't seem completely original, nor un-original to me.
For technique, I think you did a very good job. The textures are lovely, and the physics are decent as well, although I questioned why you didn't stick with the TDA theme for Miku's hair, it kind of throws off the whole TDA pack thing. Another thing that kind of bothered me was the inacuracy of their breast sizes, and how they were all the same, just different colours.
Overall the impact was decent, but nothing that would extremely catch my eye. I believe that maybe they each need their own textures, and not a re-colour of eachother, it just seems too bland. Also, I'd like to suggest possibly editing their body types to be more accurate, as well as height and facial expressions. Otherwise, great job, Yami!
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loeneo In reply to whole-wheat [2014-12-01 21:18:20 +0000 UTC]
whole-wheat
As good of a critique as it was, in my opinion the textures are fine as they are.
I think since they come as a set, they shouldn't vary too much from each other.
Another thing would be Miku's hair. It looks more elegant in the bun rather than the pigtails. It gives her a more mature look which matches her theme of light which I perceive as kindness. For her to be kind, it makes sense for her to be mature. Like the motherly or older sister figure.
Just my opinion, thought I would share.
Regardless, the models are high quality, I think we can all agree on that.
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whole-wheat In reply to loeneo [2014-12-01 21:26:46 +0000 UTC]
Well, there are TDA bun hairs now. It just stands out to me extremely.
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loeneo In reply to whole-wheat [2014-12-01 21:42:07 +0000 UTC]
I didn't notice //blind
Oh well
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Hacedor969 [2020-05-23 19:38:16 +0000 UTC]
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neechan90 [2020-04-23 04:56:58 +0000 UTC]
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ReecePlays [2019-12-10 18:27:16 +0000 UTC]
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Reallaryy [2019-10-23 16:19:07 +0000 UTC]
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maruffijd [2019-08-14 18:09:08 +0000 UTC]
I have to be honest with you YamiSweet. The links above are so loaded with adware, spyware, malware, trojans etc that the reclaiming of these models had to occur through 3rd party means. This method is not my first choice, as you have done excellent work on them, but I needed to recover them by any means available. Please consider relocating the DLs to a safer DL site. Adf.ly is so full of digital disease and is a lost cause site. It is a terrible shame that we must go dirty to get them, depriving you of credits for the DLs.
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livmi In reply to CelticCapricorn9945 [2019-07-14 12:24:13 +0000 UTC]
oh,i cant download because it doesnt take me to adfly it takes me to some other shady website, do you know how to get by that?
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CelticCapricorn9945 In reply to livmi [2019-07-14 12:43:27 +0000 UTC]
well, if you look at the top right of the screen then you'll see a timer that'll eventually turn into a skip add button click the button and it'll take you to the dl...sorry if I'm not good with explaining...
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livmi In reply to CelticCapricorn9945 [2019-07-15 07:21:14 +0000 UTC]
thanks for replying, but like i said it doesnt take me to the -real- adfly website but it takes me to some website named ecu-something something i really dont wanna look it up right now but i did yesterday and it seems to be a common thing that happens randomly to people using adfly, it tries to make you put on notifications and then spams you with ads and other stuff, again thank you for trying to help i really apriciate it (sorry my english is kinda broken)
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