Comments: 9
ElvishChozo [2014-02-27 19:06:40 +0000 UTC]
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The atmosphere of this piece is nice, with the effects and colors adding to it. However the girl's expression kind of ruins it. For me, at least. Perhaps making her cuddle with him or with a slightly less exasperated look on her face would make it a little bit better.
Either do without the serene atmosphere on both sides or without her expression.
Maybe you could make the effects on his side, but not on her side? You don't have to, it's just what I think.
The anatomy is alright, but his head's a little too big, and her head messes up a little bit as you gradually move towards him in the picture. Her eyebrows also go off of her face entirely, they go into her hair, and onto his forehead.
The lineart's okay, there are a few mess ups and I think that could have been handled a little better.
I like this piece overall, but when you look at the details, it needs improvement. Thank you for submitting, and I hope you thought my critique was fair. If not, please tell me and I will try again. Thank you!!
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Aesthedick In reply to ElvishChozo [2014-03-22 21:17:18 +0000 UTC]
.//casually mentions the fact that Liet isΒ male not female and that its normal for him to be afraid of Russia.
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YaoiMeowmaster In reply to ElvishChozo [2014-02-27 19:12:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your feedback! I think it was totally fair and I do agree that where their faces meet it's a bit botched up. I'll do my best to fix that the next time I do something like this. make sure features stay on their own faces
Thanks again, this helps a lot.Β
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ElvishChozo In reply to YaoiMeowmaster [2014-02-27 19:16:58 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I was afraid that I was a little too harsh ;u;
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YaoiMeowmaster In reply to ElvishChozo [2014-02-27 19:30:56 +0000 UTC]
No it's fine! ^_^ It's easier to understand if you're blunt about it. Don't worry, it's not like you were mean or tried to insult me or anything like that <33
I mean, other people do critiques and make unnecessary metaphors like "that arm is so broken what did she get into a car accident" so yeah. xD You're good. :3
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KiralovesKai [2014-02-28 02:47:44 +0000 UTC]
Cutte
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YaoiMeowmaster In reply to KiralovesKai [2014-02-28 21:38:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! If you dont mind me asking why do you find it cute? >u<
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