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yaoiofthewindclan13 — OC: Zephyr

Published: 2011-06-06 01:44:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 10
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Description my new OC Zephyr. I love her outfit so much! i wish i had one... and her hair. the pigtails and uber-skinnyness kinda remind me of a Vocaloid. Sadly half her right arm got cut off in scanning.
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Comments: 6

AwesomeAshes [2011-06-18 00:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow! thats kinda mary sue but good drawing!

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yaoiofthewindclan13 In reply to AwesomeAshes [2011-06-19 18:49:15 +0000 UTC]

poopy i knew it was mary sue. sigh. oh well xD

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AwesomeAshes In reply to yaoiofthewindclan13 [2011-06-20 05:28:59 +0000 UTC]

XDD

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x--KCK--x [2011-06-11 23:46:06 +0000 UTC]

I was wondering why she looked so sad, and the comments pretty much cleared that up. You portrayed her inner feelings very well in this drawing, which is always a major step of improvement for artists.
Her background story isn't really what I would define as Sue-ish, (what would I know, lol) but a bit too traumatic. A problem I actually have with most of my characters, as well. I think you might want to change the mafia part just a tad because in reality nobody would be able to escape that situation alive. Unless you know, the mafia comes back later in her story after discovering she's this famous model. Who knows?
It's an interesting concept, though!

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yaoiofthewindclan13 In reply to x--KCK--x [2011-06-12 20:22:45 +0000 UTC]

huh the sadness in her face was actually totally unintentional lol. but hey whatever makes me seem like a better artist. xD yes thats true about the mafia thing. right. herm herm herm. maybe she just awesome ninja powers of escape of something

thanks!

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x--KCK--x In reply to yaoiofthewindclan13 [2011-06-13 00:06:29 +0000 UTC]

Be like a ninja and pretend it was planned all along.
LOL, make her totally Sue-ish and say she killed the mafia, bahaha.

YAR WELCOME~

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