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Published: 2012-07-02 18:59:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 2818; Favourites: 126; Downloads: 31
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Description
As consept steampunk is masculine, dirty and deformed movement while porcelain dolls are delicate, fragile, cute and excellent element.I want to take their contrast and work on this contrast's visual. To understand this contrast and express it and every doll has a symbolic bird to express their personality
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This photograph series taken by me at santralistanbul, Turkey. cgtextures.com's smoke and fireworks textures used.
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Comments: 7
Hello again! As I see, this is another great photo-manipulation of yours, however, not as good as the other one in my opinion.
But as you probable want to hear a bit more in-detail I will give you a more detailed reason of my ratings:
To talk about the first thing, the vision, I still don't think, that porcelain is that feminine, steampunk that masculine, and also miss some major contrast-expression within your picture, however this time, when I get the message right, I can see how the girl has similar face-attributes like little birds and her posture seems to be also very light. So, now I would say, as I can find the second point of your description within this picture, 4/5 stars for vision.
Regarding originality, this picture has his great strength. you can see the birds resemble steampunk and the posture, the broken clock, its design and position, the numbers on her shirt and of course the smoke are really some original elements nicely put together.
So 5/5 stars for originality.
Well, talking about technique, the background seems kind of off here just like the clock. So, for a photo-manipulation where you try to melt different elements to a new piece, this seems more like glued together in these aspects.
However, I really like the smoke-effect and editing of the different elements, so I hope 3.5/5 stars for technique would be appropriate.
Regarding impact this piece has a lot less tension than the other one and the clock that doesn't seem to fit takes a bit of impact away, too... So, without much objective reasoning, as I don't seem to can do that while writing about impact, I would give you 3/5 stars for impact.
So, concluding, this is another great piece of you with some little fields of improvement in technique and impact as said above, but nonetheless a great photo-manipulation!
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Oh, erm, I'm not very good at critiquing. This work of art did catch my eye! It's very clean and interesting. It isn't the most original, but it does pack a punch while viewing. Something about the pure white of this woman's hair and the way the birds flitter around her in the backround is very eyecatching! The clock did have me pursing my lips though. Atop her head that way, the clock looks rather out of place and animated in comparison with the...reality of this photograph. I'm no good at photography but would recommend darkening that area. Good job!
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My favorite Photo from this project !! Thank You again my dear director Yasemin Karaca <3 <3
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