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yatz — ProgPat Strikes Again

Published: 2008-04-30 05:03:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 5469; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 3
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Description It's been 6 years since my last comics page - 10 pages into a 16 pages commission I decided that my level of suckiness was such it it could be defined as a (minor) crime against humanity, and should be terminated.
Well, I'm 6 years older - not much wiser, mind you, but more ready to tolerate my artistic shortcomings. And here I go again, trying to illus the origin of Swamp Hulk's Progressive Patriot in comics format. Hope I fare better this time, and that I manage to find the inner strength blah blah.

I'm such a wuss...

Anyway, here's page 1. Any comment would be appreciated.
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Comments: 8

AngelsInc [2008-12-13 04:44:25 +0000 UTC]

I could spend an hour praising this piece, and laughing my ass of doing it, but Ill just say it in two words instead .....f*ckin' great!

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yatz In reply to AngelsInc [2008-12-13 10:16:27 +0000 UTC]

Damn, couldn't find an emoticon for "swoon"... Hope this will do -

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AngelsInc In reply to yatz [2008-12-13 19:01:37 +0000 UTC]

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ProphetTenebrae [2008-04-30 08:16:20 +0000 UTC]

Looks pretty great to me, nice composition and good attention to detail... were it an actual comic, I'd definitely be itching to turn the page.

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Chachibenji [2008-04-30 05:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Ill be blunt and say that you are an overly self critical artist.
Just from the woman who is falling alone I will say that this looks something like what I would pull off the magazine rack in any comic store and see.
You do draw very well. Now HANDLE IT

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DTM352 In reply to Chachibenji [2008-05-01 05:25:50 +0000 UTC]

You tell him, Chachi!! (maybe itll sink finally sink if it more people hit him over the head with such all too deserving words)

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yatz In reply to Chachibenji [2008-04-30 07:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Ouch... Cruel to be kind, eh? Thanks. I'm obviously critical of this (those loose screws have long ago fallen off and are lost forever), but I AM pleased with the fact that I managed this page without any reference (except for the pasted-on BH logo); over the last few years I have lost confidence to such an extent, that I could hardly draw a line without some reference.

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Chachibenji In reply to yatz [2008-04-30 20:02:50 +0000 UTC]

The fact that you did this without reference is all the more impressive.

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