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Published: 2011-05-02 11:19:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 6277; Favourites: 129; Downloads: 202
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what to say, I am awestruck by your level of skill on this piece. As far as Crits go, I feel that this is spot on. If anything were to be added, I would suggest another person or two on the causeway.
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What is this? Some sort of temple or castle or something?
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You can change the category it is submitted to. Simply edit the image and redo that part only.
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Fantastic image. It give me great inspiration.
One has to see it at full resolution to appreciate this wonderful work.
Well done!
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Amazing work. Beautiful colours and mood overall. Well done.
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thank ya, but i think i have a slightly more updated one up
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I wanna live here 
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thanks ill have a finished-er one up soon
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i don't know how to crit this one critically, but i must say: "dAmn!"
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Its pretty rad! I like your use of detail to bring out the important parts whilst simplifying the backdrop in to some really nice bold shapes! What I dig less is how very grey it is look at the whole thing and see how nice that blue sky looks, you have lights with tinges of yellow but given that shadoweyness of the area you could probably get away with yellowing them up some more. Though really you have your darkness as well as your mid-tones but you're lacking in some really bright area/s to punch people in the face. That's not a bad place to be at though because with this much done you can look at it with your goals in mind and choose where you want the viewers eye to really be drawn to and lighten it up.
Mostly though I am finding those buildings very grey, maybe throw a colour layer on top of everything and block in some colours then drop its opacity, just to give different areas of the image different tinges of colour. That+a well thought out complimentary colour scheme with only serve to boost the importance of your focal building. Maybe have the area behind that building be dull purple/red and bring that building forward with an orange/yellow. Which would help it stand out most from its backdrop and compliment the nice blueness of the sky and water.
Love the detail work though man, its veryvery cool.
p.s. apologies if this critique is a bit unstructured, mostly just off the top of my head stuff.
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thanks for all that info i really appreciate it, ill try to use it all.
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