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YellowDizzyLombax β Bright Lights, Dull Emotion
Published: 2013-09-07 13:59:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 731; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 1
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No idea where the name came from
Just randomly thought it up at the last second.Anyway, here's Hunter taking my place at the prom (as I'm not going) - and he certainly doesn't look too impressed.
Sorry that the lighting is crap, I was just having one of those moments where I wanted to get this done quickly as I have other things to do (which are properly more important, but what the heck).
At first there wasn't a way of showing that this is Hunter, and not Ratchet. So I made the necklace have the same colour and symbol like on Hunter's armour (and the fact that his fur is a little darker).
Enjoy it while you can, 'cause I think Hunter's gonna try to kill me again. Hopefully not, from our last...deal
Hunter (c) Me
Lombax species (c) Insomniac Games
Art (c) Me
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Ahahahah
sky: uhh
this is so surprising to meΒ
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hunter; wow i never thoughtΒ i would were a dress
ratchet;me neither and its hilarious
hunter;when is kelly coming
ratchet;uh she should be here in a second
kelly; im h here-walks in wearing a sparkely teal dress-
ratchet;-drools in amusment-
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Wow hunter you look pretty
Hunter: I hate everyone
Ratchet: At least I'm not wearing a dress thank god for that
Hunter: Shut your little mouth before I kill you
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Haha, he certainly does :3
Ratchet: It's zipped! You don't need to kill me or anyone! Heh heh
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Hunter: And if you ever tell anyone about this your dead! Ratchet
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Ratchet: D-Don't worry! Y-You're s-secret safe with m-me!
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Hunter: Good
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Wow. Hunter looks great surrounded by prom lights. I don't know why you want to miss your own prom.
Hunter: *taps me on the shoulder*
Me: GAH! What are you doing here?!
Hunter: I changed my mind about that little "deal" you two made earlier.
Me: How'd you get past Axel?!
Hunter:*smirk and points to an unconscious Axel laying in the cage* I knocked him out while his back was turned. I figured you'd put me in that cage again if I tried to kill my creator so I put him in there and went after you first
Me: But you promised not to kill us!
Hunter: I know. *grabs my shirt collar and holds a knife to my throat* I lied.
Me: Um, Amber? A little help?
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Me: Right on it! *pulls out a blaster in one hand and a Groovitron Glove in the other hand* I'd rather not shoot you Hunter, but I will if you don't cooperate.
Hunter: *raises an eyebrow* YOU kill ME? HA! Don't make me laugh!
Me: I wasn't going to kill you, just scare you. But first-- *throws a Groovitron Ball* --how about you do some dancing?
Hunter: WHAT?! *starts dancing but tries to struggle not to* STOP THIS AT ONCE!!
Me: Nah, I'm good. *turns to Ieshia* Don't worry, I tweeked with it so it wouldn't affect you, only him.
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Thanks!
Axel: *wakes up, groaning* What hit me? *looks at cage bars* Why am I in this cage?
Me: You can blame Hunter for that. He knocked you out, locked you in it, and then tried to kill me.
Axel: WHAT?!
Me: *unlocks cage door and Axel steps out, stomping toward Hunter just as Groovitron stops playing*
Axel: *punches Hunter in the face* That's for suckering me AND trying to kill my creator you creep!
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Hunter: *yelps as he gets hit and falls to the floor* How DARE you hit me, you little BRAT! *goes to pounce at Axel but gets held back by YDL*
Me: *holding Hunter around the collar* Yeah, I already said your not allowed to kill anyone. Back in the cage for you then *drags Hunter to the cage*
Hunter: NO! I shall NOT be locked in that thing any more! *shruggles in the grip* Get your hands off of me!
Me: No! You still need to learn your lesson, so you going inyo that damn cage whether you like it or not! *throws Hunter in the cage and locks the door* There.
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Hunter: *snarls* YOU WON'T GET AWAY WITH THIS! WHEN I GET OUT OF HERE, I'LL MAKE SURE NEITHER OF YOU LIVE TO SEE ANOTHER DAY!
Me: Yeah, yeah. Whatever you say. *turns to YDL* We better get a restraining order. He's pissed off big time!
Hunter: *glares dangerously at Axel* And don't think I forgot about you, kid.
Axel: *glares back at Hunter*
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Me: Yeah, how about we make the order now? Ya know, just encase something happens. And get the best quality one, 'cause I think we're going to need it.
Hunter: *bares his canines* There is NO way I'm being restrained like an animal!
Me: Well you have no choice since you tried to kill us again! Sheesh! Lighten up once and a while.
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Me: You don't have to tell me twice. *calls police station*
Hunter: *aims a Dual Lacerator gun at me, but a stray blaster shot hits his hand and he drops it*
Axel: *aiming his wrench* Don't even think about it.
Hunter: *rubs his palm and gives Axel a dirty look*
Me: *hangs up and turns to YDL* Well, I explained the cause for the restraining orders to the chief and he said he'll send us the best one he's got. *sees Hunter and Axel glaring at each other* Hmm, I wonder what will happen if those two started fighting?
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Me: I don't think it'll end well. Besides, he won't get out of that cage, so I guess it won't happen. Plus, Axel properly knows some of his moves if he has read the story, whereas Hunter doesn't know anything about Axel.
Hunter: *still glares at Axel* You and those girls are so dead when I get outta here. Maybe I should start with you, just so I can see their shocked and pained faces as I kill you slowly *grins evilly*
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Axel: *chuckles* Fat chance. I won't be giving you the satisfaction I'm afraid. *turns to YDL* By the way, I have read your story. He's doing some pretty horrible things.
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Me: *chuckles nervously* Err, yeah, I know 
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Axel: So do I. I don't know if I can forgive Hunter for what he's done to him. *death glares at Hunter*
Me: Hey Amber, you wanna step outside and eavesdrop on their conversation--just to hear how they would interact?
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Me: Yeah, sure thing. Wonder how everything will turn out once we do. Come on *walks out the room with Ieshia*
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Hunter: *sees Axel's back facing him and pulls out an Electrolyzer, picking the lock and stepping out the cage. He pulls out a knife and sneaks behind Axel.*
Axel: *hears Hunter approaching and turns around, blocking the knife with his wrench* What are you doing?
Hunter: Finishing where I left off. *swings the knife again, but Axel blocks it with his wrench* but before I kill you, I have a question: Who are you?
Axel: My creator already told you my name, genius.
Hunter: I'm not talking about that. *another swing, Axel dodges* I mean--who the hell are you really? I never saw you before yet you remind me of someone.
Axel: Should it really matter to you? *parries another swing from Hunter*
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Hunter: Not really, but I'd like to know a bit more about my victim before I kill him *swings his knife again but Axel blocks it with his wrench again* Will you quit that?!
Axel: Nope, I'm afraid not *dodges another attack from Hunter* Why should I tell you? You wouldn't care much.
Hunter: *glares* I'll force it out of you if you don't tell me. *tries to attack Axel again*
Axel: *raises an eyebrow* Oh really? How would you do that? *dodges Hunter's attack by an inch*
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Hunter: Let's say I have...ways of getting information.
Axel: By doing what? Forcibly restraining and torturing your victims with deadly tools? *smiles at Hunter's surprised look* Yeah. I'm on to you. I'm not an idiot.
Hunter: *pulls out another knife* So you know about me. How quaint. *double swings at Axel's arms, legs, and stomach but he dodges them all* HOLD STILL ALREADY!
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Axel: Nah, I'm good at the moment *blocks more attacks with his wrench* Really? I thought you were stronger than this. *swings his wrench at Hunter*
Hunter: *dodges the attack by rolling on the floor, and managing to slice onr of his knives through Axel's leg clothing*
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*Axel winces and stumbles back from the swing. Hunter standsΒ up, charging him again, but Axel steps sideways and dodges his double jab, grabbing one of Hunter's wrists and punching him hard in the nose. Hunter stumbles back from the blow, dropping the knife. He wipes his nose and looks at his hand, seeing blood on it.*
Hunter: *chuckles deliriously*
Axel: *raises an eyebrow* What's so funny?
Hunter: You made me bleed. *chuckles again* Nobody has done that before let alone resist my attempts of killing them for so long. I have to admit: you're a formidable opponent. I'm impressed.
Axel: Really? That's a first.
Hunter: But that doesn't mean I'm letting you off the hook. I don't waste time with flattery and since you're the first person who actually stands a fighting chance against me, I think I'll go easy on killing you.
Axel: *rolls eyes* Figures.
Hunter: Now--*points his remaining knife* how do you want to settle this? Will you tell me who you are or do I have to find out the old-fashioned way?
Axel: I already said no and even if I did tell you, you would use the knowledge to your advantage.
Hunter: *thinking to himself* SmartΒ kid. *aloud* Hmph, and just when I started developing a little respect for you. Oh well, I'll find out even if I have to torture your creator for it. *grins at Axel's defensive look*
Me: *peeking through a window* I am seriously thinking about drawing this!
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Me: That'll be so cool if you did. I just hope Axel will be okay, but then he's a strong person so hopefully he'll be fine...
*Back with Hunter and Axel*
Axel: *growls* If you dare hurt my creator, I'll--
Hunter: You'll what? If you really know SO much about me, you'll know I always find a way to kill a certain person when other pathetic people are in my way. So, what's your choice, kid?
Axel: I've already said I'm not going to tell you who I am. But, I will also not let you kill my creator. Sorry, I'm not giving you the pleasure.
Hunter: *grins* Oh, too bad *raises his knife ready* Seems like I'm going to have to do this the hard, old-fashioned way *charges fast at Axel, picking up the knife on the floor while doing so, and goes to attack Axel with speed*
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*Axel ducks then swings his head back, but one of Hunter's knives graze his left ear. Hunter then swings repeatedly at Axel, who is barely dodging.*
Axel: *thinking to himself* He's really trying now.
Hunter: *cuts Axel on the arm; he winces* Oh, I'm sorry. Did that hurt? *kicks Axel to the floor* That's nothing compared to what I'm really gonna do to you.
Axel: *lifts his legs and kicks Hunter in the chest* Oh yeah? We'll see about that! *stands up and activates the blaster on his wrench just as Hunter gets up, firing a shot and hitting him*
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Hunter: Argh! *gets back to his feet with his ears flat against his head* You little BRAT! You asked for it now! *rolls on the ground and grabs Axel's legs, tackling Axel to the ground*
Axel: Get off of me! *struggles in Hunter's grip as Hunter pins him to the floor* I'm still not telling you anything, ya know.
Hunter: Aww, that's a shame, because you're not going to have a choice *holds a knife to Axel's neck* Now tell me: who...are...you?
Axel: *remains silence as he squirms in Hunter's tight grip*
Hunter: *narrows his eyes dangerously* Tell me now, or you won't like the consequences.
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Axel: *unnoticingly grasping his wrench while turning on the tether* You don't scare me, Hunter.
Hunter: *growls* Wrong answer! *raises the knife but gets stunned by electricity; Axel rolls away from him as he falls to his knees and stands up. He then strikes Hunter in the side with his wrench, spins it and strikes him across the head. Hunter flies across the room back into the cage where he hits the back of his head, falling unconscious*
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Axel: Hmph. *closes the door of the cage and locks it as Amber and Ieshia walks into the room*
Me: Wow. Just...wow-- that was some show there. Nice moves and dodges skills against Hunter!
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Axel: *leans against his wrench* Thanks.
Me: That was too close. For a minute, you had me worried when things started to get a little out of hand.
Axel: There's no need. I'm fine now. *looks at Hunter* I can't believe this guy is an evil version of my dad.
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Me: Yeah... Well, everyone does have an evil side; unfortunately for Ratchet, he got bit by a Jolf which released his evil side. *frowns* I, myself, wasn't expecting Hunter to turn out like this, yet I'm his creator.
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Axel: So he developed a mind of his own then--that's kinda creepy. It's a good thing this never happens to Dad in my timeline.
Me: *looks at a still unconscious Hunter* How long will he be out?
Axel: I think I accidentally gave him a concussion with how hard I just hit him, so I'd say at least two days. *turns to Amber* Is that okay with you?
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Me: So as long as he isn't killing us, I'm totally fine with it. I haven't finished writing up the next chapter of the story yet, so yeah... Also, I could draw more OOC of him as he's unconscious for a while *chuckles*
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Me: 
Axel: Are you sure? Because if I leave and he wakes up, he's gonna beΒ pretty mad again--possibly more than usual.
Me: We'll be fine. Besides, knowing Hunter, you're probably gonna be his primary target now, especially when he realizes you defeated him in a fight.
Axel: If you say so. *Axel starts walking out the room*
Me: I'll call you if we need you again. And say hello to Ratchet and Sasha for me! *Axel waves back and walks out; I turn to Amber* So, can I suggest a clown suit? I bet he'd look really funny in that! And if you put him in another dress, I have some in my closet you can borrow for him in a variety of colors and styles!
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Me: Oh, that would be so hilarious! I could put him in different dresses and outfits, to see what one suits him the most *laughs* Or what about a little school girl outfit? Heh, that'll be quite funny too! I SO have to start sketching these soon before he wakes up. *looks over to Hunter* Hmm, I wonder what colour would suit him best...
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Me: *looks Hunter up and down* Hmm, I think he'll look great in orange and maybe yellow! Bright colors would contrast good with his dark fur!
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Me: Ha, yeah! I'll have to try out different ones, but orange and yellow sounds good! Now, long or short dress? Hmm...
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Short, to show off his legs!
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Definitely!
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I got some matching accessories too!
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Sweet! We could put a few of them on him too
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there's a lot of baxes that look like Ratch Β ( thankfully I dont ) Β they're either a cream color , tan,white, or golden yellow . Β
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Yeah, I've noticed. But then Huntet is Ratchet's evil side, so they would look very similar XD
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hmmm... I'm still thinking about the fur textures... (but it looks awesome with hair!).... Β I think you should try blending the stripes a bit better with the brighter fur and use a bit shorter strokes on the body. But it looks goot this far! 
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Yeah, I still want to improve on the fur texture (thanks!). I'll try that out and see if it works, but it most properly will. Thank you!
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And pretty XDΒ
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