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yellowducktape — Marked Men part 1
Published: 2011-10-02 17:13:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 568; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 3
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Description It was his 21st birthday when he felt the burning of the mark into his flesh. He looked down to see a still red "S" on his right hipbone.
'No,' he thought frantically, 'This isn't happening. There must be some mistake.'
The second boy was also waiting. Waiting and staring at the "G" that had been burned into his hip two years ago and doing something he hadn't done in years, wishing.
Charlie came out of his room trying to remain calm. There was just some mistake… He would find someone to call… Alex was still asleep so he didn't have to worry about waking him.
He looked in the phone book and dialed the number stepping outside the small flat…
"Hello, and thank you for calling," said a peppy women's voice, "How can I help you today?"
"Hello…" said Charlie a little awkwardly, "Today is my 21st birthday."
"Oh, Congratulations!" squealed the woman making Charlie blush a deep red, "What can I help you with on this very special day?"
"I think my Mark is wrong…" said Charlie quietly.
There was a long silence.
Uncertain Charlie whispered, "… Hello?"
The woman on the other end recovered enough to reply, "I don't think that's possible dear," she said a little uncertainly.
"Well, I think it is," said Charlie a little stubbornly, "Is there a way to reverse it?"
The woman recovered herself fully, "There are never mistakes," she said more firmly, "Just learn to live with it."
And she hung up in a huff.
Charlie slid down the wall. He was Marked as Straight… but he was in love with his best friend.
He put his head in his hands.
Alex came padding out of his room on cat feet. He was going to cook breakfast for Charlie… Or try to. Last time he made anything more than tea he had almost burned the house down…
He poked his head around Charlie's door to make sure that he was still sleeping to find an empty bed where a boy was supposed to be. Looking around frantically he saw the slightly open flat door. He raced to it panicking to find a pale Charlie sitting on the floor.
"Charlie!" Alex cried immensely relieved dropping to his knees and throwing his arms around the boy.
Charlie was jerked from his thoughts and put on a smile.
"Breakfast time!" cried Alex.
"Oh, no," Charlie groaned, grinning.
Alex jumped up and bounded into the flat.
Charlie followed him more slowly willing himself into a good mood for the benefit of the boy he was no longer allowed to love.
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Comments: 34

KeepSmilingandSing [2012-02-25 08:00:52 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! I know you wrote this ages ago but it's a really good idea. Going to go read the other parts now!

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blablabla5885 [2011-12-22 03:03:16 +0000 UTC]

i might just be stupid but im confused !!!!

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yellowducktape In reply to blablabla5885 [2011-12-23 00:00:31 +0000 UTC]

No your not stupid!
Basically it's a world where the government tells people their sexualities through markings so S=straight G=gay and they have to follow them. Does that explain stuff?

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ridermagraw In reply to yellowducktape [2012-01-16 05:19:00 +0000 UTC]

what about bisexual?

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yellowducktape In reply to ridermagraw [2012-01-17 00:26:47 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't exist in this society. spoilers.

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ridermagraw In reply to yellowducktape [2012-01-17 03:02:46 +0000 UTC]

well that sucks

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BethTheBubblyGirl [2011-11-05 01:31:42 +0000 UTC]

OMFG
ITS AWWWEEESSSOOOOOOOMMMMEEEee
poor Charlie :/
BUT it possible to be straight, fall in love with someone of the same gender as youelf. If they're the only oneyou're attracted to then you technically counted as straight

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yellowducktape In reply to BethTheBubblyGirl [2011-11-05 02:39:39 +0000 UTC]

THANKS!
I know I'm just twisting reality a bit!

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rachelskellington [2011-10-24 22:25:35 +0000 UTC]

I loooove this!! It's such an interesting idea. Part 2 is awesome, too!

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yellowducktape In reply to rachelskellington [2011-10-24 22:38:20 +0000 UTC]

THanks! <3

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CATSAREGREAT [2011-10-04 05:13:36 +0000 UTC]

That is a very cool idea

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yellowducktape In reply to CATSAREGREAT [2011-10-05 01:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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CATSAREGREAT In reply to yellowducktape [2011-10-06 23:37:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome Can't wait for the next part ^_^

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Chebey93 [2011-10-03 12:01:38 +0000 UTC]

You have such original ideas, it makes me very jealous! Can't wait for the next part

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yellowducktape In reply to Chebey93 [2011-10-04 01:27:38 +0000 UTC]

awwwww thanks! <3

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BrianaBreakable [2011-10-02 23:15:30 +0000 UTC]

I LIKE THIS. MORE MORE MORE.

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yellowducktape In reply to BrianaBreakable [2011-10-03 00:36:19 +0000 UTC]

I will get to it eventually!
Thanks so much for the fav!!!!! <3

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BrianaBreakable In reply to yellowducktape [2011-10-04 01:26:17 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I like it! A LOT.

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groovybluellamas [2011-10-02 17:49:24 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS AMAZING. WRITE MORE <3

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yellowducktape In reply to groovybluellamas [2011-10-02 21:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'll try my hardest.

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groovybluellamas In reply to yellowducktape [2011-10-03 06:37:21 +0000 UTC]

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Iloveyounathan14 [2011-10-02 17:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Loved this <3<3<3
No Charlie IT CAN CHANGE

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yellowducktape In reply to Iloveyounathan14 [2011-10-02 21:50:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you! <3
You'll see!

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Iloveyounathan14 In reply to yellowducktape [2011-10-03 19:20:55 +0000 UTC]

OOOH i cant wait! x]

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PeeledBananas [2011-10-02 17:41:01 +0000 UTC]

this is like a really great idea i love it

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yellowducktape In reply to PeeledBananas [2011-10-02 21:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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astridissocoollike [2011-10-02 17:33:50 +0000 UTC]

Why are you gifted with a mind that can think up such awesome stuff? I'm jelly!

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yellowducktape In reply to astridissocoollike [2011-10-02 21:49:04 +0000 UTC]

awwwwww thank you so much!

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ThatSwedishGirl [2011-10-02 17:31:55 +0000 UTC]

This is just brilliant. Pleeeeease write quickly

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yellowducktape In reply to ThatSwedishGirl [2011-10-02 21:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'll try but... I'M SO LAZY!

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archii999 [2011-10-02 17:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh. My. God. You literally have the best ideas. I love this one! Can't wait for the next part!

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yellowducktape In reply to archii999 [2011-10-02 21:49:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Macaggow [2011-10-02 17:21:00 +0000 UTC]

brilliant
I can't wait to see what happens XD

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yellowducktape In reply to Macaggow [2011-10-02 21:49:53 +0000 UTC]

THANKS!

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