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yellowducktape — Why Tom? part 8
Published: 2011-09-11 19:51:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 448; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description Liam:
Slowly the door was pushed open. Everyone else was focused on the happy Alex and Charlie, but Liam saw it. Then Liam saw a slender metal object.
"NOOOOOO!" the yell burst forth and Liam was shocked by his capacity to make a noise that loud.
The blue-haired boy with the gun whipped around pointing the gun at Liam so the boy could see down the barrel. Then Tom's eyes widened as he took in the boy standing to the right of Liam. Liam caught the heat of the glance and stepped in front of the boy he loved to shield him from the gun the blue-haired dictator was now pointing at Michael.
Tom:
No.
That was not Michael. Did he have no friends left?
Tom opened his mouth and croaked, "Michael?"
Then he found his words.
"Traitor." Tom spat, "Coward. You betray me now but how long till you switch your allegiance to keep yourself alive? I would offer your life in exchange for renewed service but like a coward you let someone else stand in front of you."
'Why doesn't Liam move?' thought Tom, 'Do I really want to kill him?'
"He's not a coward, Tom," said Liam quietly.
"Move, Dryden," said Tom sharply, more than a little surprised.
"Liam, he's right," said Michael quietly stepping from behind Liam, "Tom, you're right I am a coward. But so are you. You killed millions because you weren't brave enough to tell a boy you loved him."
"Lies," screamed Tom tears forming.
"Well, I won't fucking work for a coward," said Michael quietly, "I choose the Nerdfighters."
Tom fired a shot from shaking hands but Liam pushed Michael down. Then suddenly someone grabbed Tom from behind. Before anyone knew what was happening there was a bang.
When everyone looked up the floor was stained red.
Ed:
"Tom," an agonized voice whispered.
"Tom," a bit louder.
"TOM," a scream pierced the air.
Everyone was staring as Ed cradled a lifeless Tom in his arms, sobbing and covered in blood.
'I'm a murderer,' thought Ed and it tore at his chest like a knife.
"Why, Tom?" whispered Ed kissing the bluenette gently on the lips willing him back to life.
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Comments: 33

ingenmansland [2011-09-20 18:05:16 +0000 UTC]

omg!
this series is amazing

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imallergictotape [2011-09-17 01:43:21 +0000 UTC]

the first thing i said when i finished this part was HOLY SHOOSH I NEED MORE so yeah, that should tell you everything

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flowergirl2011 [2011-09-16 06:45:06 +0000 UTC]

D': toms evil... But ed loves him... But hes evil... But ed loves him... Sory, just having an inner dilema more? Xxx

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yellowducktape In reply to flowergirl2011 [2011-09-17 00:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Hehehehehe. Sorry!
More soon.

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flowergirl2011 In reply to yellowducktape [2011-09-18 22:21:12 +0000 UTC]

yay <3 cant wait hun xxx

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Radiostar64 [2011-09-13 03:47:27 +0000 UTC]

*tears* Why Tom?

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yellowducktape In reply to Radiostar64 [2011-09-14 00:09:28 +0000 UTC]

<3 <3 <3 thanks for the fav!

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Radiostar64 In reply to yellowducktape [2011-09-14 00:59:11 +0000 UTC]

No prollem

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NevermindTheTruth [2011-09-12 02:28:52 +0000 UTC]

I honest to god yelled out loud "OH MY GOD HE KILLED TOM! YOU BASTARD!!!"
Yep. Too much South Park lately.
THIS WAS AMAZING THOUGH HOLY SHIT MOREMOREMORE

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yellowducktape In reply to NevermindTheTruth [2011-09-12 02:32:00 +0000 UTC]

HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE! Nice.
Thank you! There will be more soonish hopefully!

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NevermindTheTruth In reply to yellowducktape [2011-09-12 02:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Yayyyyyyyy! ^_^

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Sarey1998 [2011-09-12 01:34:59 +0000 UTC]

I saw this was up and I was like "woo-hoo!" out loud
My mom responded, what has Chameleon Circuit done now. Gotta love parents.
I love this story sooooooooooooo much. But Tom....no

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yellowducktape In reply to Sarey1998 [2011-09-12 01:39:31 +0000 UTC]

LOLZ!
Thaaaaanks! <3

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Lexis474542 [2011-09-12 01:22:32 +0000 UTC]

NOT TOM! *huff* they could have just all made up right? ...nope i guess not
Great story <333

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yellowducktape In reply to Lexis474542 [2011-09-12 01:35:54 +0000 UTC]

I actually tried that but then it didn't work.
thank you!

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Lexis474542 In reply to yellowducktape [2011-09-12 01:48:03 +0000 UTC]

It doesnt seem like it would...WHY TOM?!
Youre very welcome

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ThatSwedishGirl [2011-09-11 21:59:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god.

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yellowducktape In reply to ThatSwedishGirl [2011-09-12 01:35:16 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Iloveyounathan14 [2011-09-11 21:22:58 +0000 UTC]

Well... 0.o ummm... Wow freakin AMAZING!!! Will there be another part? Please say yes!

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yellowducktape In reply to Iloveyounathan14 [2011-09-11 21:25:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you! Yes there is one more!

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bcbgvbhi123 [2011-09-11 21:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Damn, it...ill start the series soon...and ur fucking twisted ...I LOVE YOUUUU xD

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yellowducktape In reply to bcbgvbhi123 [2011-09-11 21:24:03 +0000 UTC]

YAY! i can't wait!
I know. BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Love you too!!!!!!!

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KateFlys [2011-09-11 20:48:05 +0000 UTC]

no... nonononono
Ed... Tom...
My cries... all of them...

(great story thought )

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yellowducktape In reply to KateFlys [2011-09-11 21:20:41 +0000 UTC]

awww thanks!
Yeah I feel a little bad for putting them through so much pain...

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bluebirdcall [2011-09-11 20:26:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Oh oh oh aah!! I can't form coherant words! So good!

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yellowducktape In reply to bluebirdcall [2011-09-11 21:20:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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astridissocoollike [2011-09-11 20:06:24 +0000 UTC]

I've been waiting so much for this

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yellowducktape In reply to astridissocoollike [2011-09-11 21:19:34 +0000 UTC]

THanks!!! i really want to thank you1 You've been so nice from the start!

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astridissocoollike In reply to yellowducktape [2011-09-12 04:11:18 +0000 UTC]

Well, you've been such a great writer from the start! It's really amazing

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yellowducktape In reply to astridissocoollike [2011-09-12 23:25:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Chebey93 [2011-09-11 20:02:32 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhhhhh. So good! I was so excited when I saw this had gone up! Poor Ed!
I think I liked this too much

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yellowducktape In reply to Chebey93 [2011-09-11 21:18:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you! <3

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Chebey93 In reply to yellowducktape [2011-09-11 21:27:33 +0000 UTC]

No worries

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