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YellowfangOfStarclan — Go Ahead. They're Not Mine.
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Published: 2010-08-04 20:08:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1504; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 19
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I put my heart and soul into this picture! I love it so much!! I especially love how Ashfur's expression turned out! He's mad and confused, plus I gave him a Grimmjow hairdo. ^^ And Squirrelflight's face turned out great too! She looks unamused and believable. Hollyleaf got cut out by Ashfur's ear. And the fire is a little too thin. Other than that, I love this picture!!
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As far as I know, this is really good! ;] (Though it could use more improvementse.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="
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-Squirrelflight looks like she is... happy
-Ashfur ans Squirrel`s bodys look to small for they`re heads
-The ears could have an inside just like real cats do instead of making a cone
- The shading(or lighting) could be a little red to reflected the backround
-The lineart is a little to thick
-The tree needs better reaslim. Try the dodge and burn tool on very small soft brush and play around with it. (for photoshop)
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-I love the poses of lionblaze and jayfeather :3 very nice
-Ashfur`s expression of shock is great
-The fire may not look as proffesional, but I like how well it is done. very pretty :]
-The bushes are drawn awsome
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thank you for the critique. ^^ i use gimp though so i don't have as many tools as photoshop and Squirrelflight was supposed to look, well i was going for amused and content to make her look convincing to Ashfur. and i'll work on the shading and lighting more. ^^
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Oh and sorry for the ratings... I... umm... just wanted to be honest xD
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Squirrelflight: i a te your pie
Ashfur: O.o
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Wait why would she say "Go ahead they're not mine."?
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****SPOILER****
She said that so Ashfur would leave, because he can't hurt her by killing them if they aren't hers. After this, the three learn that their real mom is Leafpool and dad is Crowfeather.
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
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this scene happened during the fire in the ThunderClan camp. that's how it all happened because **!!SPOILER!!** Hollyleaf, Lionblaze, and Jayfeather were trapped by the fire and Squirrelflight was trying to save them but Ashfur wouldn't let her.
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I REMEMBER THIS PART!!!! XD just to tell you, i finally finished Sunrise!!! XD i hate the part when hollyleaf died......
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how could you hate it? XD she was so annoying! (besides she didn't die. she just ran into the tunnels then they collapsed blocking her exit. it didn't crush her, she probably came out on WindClan's side and is plotting against Leafpool right now)
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lol, hmmmm.... are you telling me whats gonna happen? my favorite charrie is Hollyleaf! yeah, she was a little annoying, but she was cool! plus she acts a lot like me!!!
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no. i'm just saying there's no way she died because there's no proof. they just saw the tunnel collapse and assumed she died. (lol! i said they saw it and Jayfeather can't even see! XD)
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ooooh... ok! im just saying, because i haven't read the new one yet! its called The Fourth Apprentice, you heard of it?
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yeah, i'm not going to start reading it until the paperback books come out. (the hardback are like $15 each, the paperback are only $7) right now i'm catching up on the books I have, but haven't read (Code of the Clans, Battles of the Clans, and Firestar's Quest) ^^
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i read Code of the Clans, Cats of the Clans, and another one i forgot the name of.. i never heard of Battles of the Clans! ^^
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yeah, it just came out about a month ago
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oh! no wonder! im gonna try to get it!
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wow you did alot to do this and its a great job to me
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thank you! ^^
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I love Ashfur's "D'oh!" face XD
I remember being seriously confused at that part, but I had already figured out who their mom was.
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thank you! ^^ me too! i hated that! knowing all the parts before you read them! it gets on my nerves. lol! oh, well. ^^
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No problem 
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Awesome! 8D I was so shocked by this scene, but I guess she did have to act that way to make it believable. xP Great pic!
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wat's Squirrelflight saying to Ashfur? and i luv this pic too! u can tell u put everything into making its ^^
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she's saying he can kill Hollyleaf, Jayfeather, and Lionblaze. She said she's not their mother so if he wanted to hurt her he would have to find another way. (she was lying about caring if they died. she was saying that to get him not to kill them. like reverse psychology)
that all sounds really confusing when i explained it
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lolz, that's cool ^^ i luv the way when u draw u always have some special meaning to the pic ^^
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Looks nice! The only thing that somewhat disturbs me is that the lighting on Squirrelflight's muzzle 
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LOL! 
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thank you! ^^
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