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Published: 2008-04-09 06:46:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 814; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 26
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Err.. this has nothing to do with a popcorn gun, though the idea tempts me.I don't know how I would fix the arms.
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*tries to find something to critique*
I guess the poofy half sleeve glove thing *struggles to find a definition* on her left lower arm (the one on the right side of the picture if you are looking at it) looks off. It doesn't appear to connect the same way the one on the other side, like it sags funny or something.
Yay, I got the critique outta the way.
I LURVES her hat! It's awesome! I would never use it but it's cute and cool and easily the first thing I noticed. Although I didn't realize it was a pirate hat. I thought it was some kind of cute goth maid thing because of the frill. should be pink. And the frill should be black. Or vice versa. But use a combination of pink and black (if you ever color it) to add to the cute goth image. :3
Besides, pink and black is smexy when combined. :3
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The poofy half sleeve glove thing is an arm warmer. XD Maybe it's because her arms are positioned differently. She has a funny posture and such. Anyway, this piece is too old to be bothered with now. I sold it for.. I think it was 25g on Menewsha; hahaha. XD
And it's a fancy pirate hat. Of higher class/status and such. XD I prefer pink and gray color schemes myself. It's sorta hard to work with black, so dark gray is the solution for me.
Thanks for the long comment. I must've read it a couple of times before thinking of a reply.
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Yup. When someone requests critique I try to comply. It'a awesome that I new what picture it was just by your comment, considering the time its been sicne I commented. Means I must have liked it more than I realized. :3
Pink and Grey work good too. Grey is a mix of black and white, which both work awesome with pink. It depends on the shade of pink being used, actually. I lurve hot pink and black (the combination I have dubbed as "pink goth" XD). But if you paled the pink out, grey would probably work better.
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Wah~ It's so cute. ; u; <333
I love how you drew her face and ears. >u<
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Jumbo pirate hats are win, I love the frilly stuff on it.
Anyways, her right sleeve looks flat compared to the left and the jumbo pirate hat needs moar skulls.
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Menewshan? It looks a lot like Gaia... why did you make another art shop there? *curious*
Anywho! I think this is super-duper cute. I love the pose (Yay Senshistock!) and the giant hat is great. XD The head size looks fine to me! Good work~
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*u* Yeessssss, I'll never stop using Senshistock LOL! Maybe one day when I'm laik 30 years old i can come up with good poses and draw those without reference.
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Oh, one crit I have is that because her left arm is foreshortened, maybe shade it a bit to make it look like it's farther back in space, and not like she has a really short forearm. :3
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Oh right, and Menewsha is just a smaller community. *u* It'll be easier for me to make friends there I think.
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Ooh, do you have reference for that? I know that graying out thing that people do to show body parts that are farther away, but not for body parts that go far away and then come back close again. 8D;;
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Well, I'm looking at the stock picture you used and it looks like the reason there's no shadow there is because the light was on that side of her body. The only thing I can say to help is try looking in a mirror with a light to make a visible shadow for you to draw. I'm working on foreshortening myself, so I can't be of that much help.
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Awwww, she's cute! ; w ;
I would give critique but I am, one, sick, two, getting ready and three, not finding much to critique about that hasn't already been said.
@ w @
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waa..truly awesome~~!!! really great pose and all! Awesome~!!!
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It's really really cute!
Also the pirate hat OwO!!!
And like, the pose is very nice~ It's nice to try out different poses, nyaah~? :"D
Aaah~ Yahyah~ You should add more folds near the arms 'coz like if you do that pose there will be folds there~ xD
But it still look good!!!
Yehey for pencil artz!
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The head and shoulders are good. They're not out of porportion, as far as I can tell. Her left arm, however, does seem out of porportion. It seems like the upper portion needs to be longer, though that may just be the perspective... I doubt that explaination, personally, but whatever. And the wrinkle on the right sleeve is out of place.
Aaaaand, that's all that's wrong with it. 8D I love the kitteh ears, the way that you drew it seems more natural than if you just drew it with straight lines. (I have no clue how to explain it. :'D) The frills on the pirate hat-- well, I can't draw frills so I may be biased in this (anyone who can draw frills better than me = auto-respect.. In frills.) but I think it looks lovely. The cat tail could use a bit more detail, but it's fine as is.
'Kay, I'm done nao. 8D
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Arm perspective reference ---> [link]
=3
Haha, thanks, I just get bothered if there's no wrinkles. XD LOL |: Tail detail. XD
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Yeah, the left arm is foreshortened that's why it looks so short. :3 It's really good that you're using stock, Yellow, you'll learn a lot that way!
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