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supernat21 [2019-03-16 20:14:19 +0000 UTC]
Awesome so cool
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Anna-IgnisDraconis [2019-01-10 18:52:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow, really amazing. I can't even describe it with words. Truly amazing.
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MetellaStella In reply to FallstreakFeathers [2019-01-10 05:02:52 +0000 UTC]
Ah actually I wrote that quite a while ago and thought it fit the picture eerily well.Β
Sure, with credit you can post it wherever you like ^_^
I've written lots of other poetry too, (some fantasy) though I haven't really decided a place for it other than GD. I considered HubPages . . .
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FallstreakFeathers In reply to MetellaStella [2019-01-10 05:09:53 +0000 UTC]
that's incredible tbh! I could've sworn it was about the image, oh my gosh xD
I'll definitely be checking out some of your other work!
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MetellaStella In reply to FallstreakFeathers [2019-01-14 04:48:02 +0000 UTC]
Yeah with a lil bit of tweaking and/or just erasing a few details, it could fit perfectly. (feel free to do that if ya want, I also modified it slightly for another purpose/version)Β
X3 This is what fantasy comes to mind
docs.google.com/document/d/1N8β¦
docs.google.com/document/d/117β¦
And I think these are the only things I have posted on DA atm
Window to the Soul?If eyes are the window to the soul
Then why . . .
Do I feel, when I highlight
With black maskera
That I'm drawing attention away from my Inner Self
That when I conceal the tired shadows under my eyes
I'm erasing a bit of what it means to be human
And freezing into another glossy picture of a face
If eyes could communicate . . .
No, but I've seen the message.
The translation, wordless and stealthy, unfurls,
Can slip in unnoticed by so many girls.
They tell us to talk with our eyes and our bodies
A hundred times over on big silver screens
A million times over on ads on TV
The unvaried vocabulary
The vernacular of voluptuousness
Insinuations that scream and shout
And drown out-
Without-
Making a sound.
Yes, perhaps eyes and hips and hands can talk . . .
But they can't say much else.
So I ask, with the most important part of us at stake,
What is the window to the soul?
Almost every animal, from the lowly fly, has eyes
But Man had to i
In Honor of Olaf's Frozen AdventureI have excavated memories.
I remember the Snow Queen.
Tapes that my father played for me.
Have you ever heard them?
Sigourney Weaver wove the tale on our journey.
Not only does it have symphony
And story
It's f~~king feminist as all get out.
Not only does it pass the Bechdel Test
The only male character is a dapper lad in distress
It fails whatever the reverse of that test would be. COOL
Ladhceb Test? Yeah, that works, it even says βLad.β
Disney, take notes, now
Anna and scared Elsa
Would be begginβ for mercy
From Gerda.
I wrote a 3D princess character analysis
But alas
YouTubeβs commenting system
couldnβt help get it back.
I had to settle for this:
Amazing nuances to unpack from βLet it Go.β Finally can unleash her feelings, yet emotional scarring prevents her from facing them. "You'll never see me cry."
And you revert to your fear as soon as Anna is near.
Poor dear.
+1 for the alliteration and the word "fractals"
Thatβs paltry c
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Yessys In reply to Revan005 [2019-01-09 16:37:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!^^
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ObsianCaetus [2019-01-09 15:16:57 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely lovely work. Love the scale between the dragon and the environment.
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sailorpeach009 [2019-01-09 13:27:09 +0000 UTC]
A true beauty plus I love fantasy
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Yessys In reply to sailorpeach009 [2019-01-09 13:31:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!Β
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Fotoref [2019-01-09 12:45:10 +0000 UTC]
Very nice!
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Yessys In reply to Fotoref [2019-01-09 12:57:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks !
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mattback [2019-01-09 12:19:30 +0000 UTC]
Truly majestic!
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Yessys In reply to mattback [2019-01-09 12:35:32 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, thank you so much!Β
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Yessys In reply to T-A-Oart [2019-01-09 11:31:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!Β
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