TastyButts [2016-02-17 01:34:31 +0000 UTC]
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Well Done:Human, you for sure are good at portraits. I like the hue of periwinkle blue, a very subtle color. I also like the detail of the lips and eyes (by far better than me.) The mask and hair are also well done in a captivating way.Needs Improvement:The eyes need to be bigger, their too childlike or small (some slight asymmetry you should check and more lash). Also the face doesn't seem symmetrical (mostlikely due to the shadows but see if you can make it less asymmetrical. Another thing is the mask. Needs more shadows at the side and the feathers look invisible. Try to put ore detail other they'll look like they're disappearing. Last thing use the black pen to outline sparingly otherwise it'll look too much like a comic book.-TB
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