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Published: 2011-10-14 01:20:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 2806; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 65
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it's a poem!and some fluxx stuff. to make up for the bad poetry. the only part i actually like is "verse to verse"
anyway if you can't read my handwriting, this is what it's supposed to read as:
winning ticket, life reimbursed;
from the funeral hearse.
from verse to verse
we're well rehearsed
in each word and rhyme
ready to commit our crime.
don't wait in line
for a light of lime
we'll set the world aflame
play their game
win our fame
have no shame
history will write our name.
usual babbling nonsense.
i know it looks like "histoy" because forgot the "r" at first and then squeezed it in. this happens a lot. but i hope you like it.
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Comments: 11
Interesting.
I like the poem, but it's kinda hard to read with all the fluxx around it.
I kept missing the final words in each line.
But the fluxx does add to the chaotic and seize-the-day-all-or-nothing attitude of the speaker in the poem.
So overall, I like.
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glad you approve. nobody at home got it.
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like the poem and the doodle. Its so wonderfully....chaotic.
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I love the idea! It's original and I love the poem and design. Great job :3
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just the effect i was going for
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