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ok, pgs 3&4 ~
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ok so, those would eb pgs 3 and 4, gaah, doing 2 pages per day is more tyring than expected (and gah, still gotta improve alot on panneling T_T)
Now its and 's turn! its over for me till they do their pages xD!
anyway! hope u like it
cheers~
~sketcher2007
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Comments: 38
Good so far! I would suggest though, not saying "Liek"and such :/ To make it more accessible to more audiences, I suggest spelling things correctly. The arts really, REALLY good! , but don't ruin it by making yourselves seem like little kids and using internet spelling!
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LOLYES
thank uu
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AHAHA so funny XD
Cow, and the end of it is really great XD
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haha xD thanks ^^ thou seems lieks ome ppl thought ti would be some sort fo ecchi manga becuz of that, think some are too oversensitive, like c'mon
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a manga kinda has to be unexpected right? like anime and stuff
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well xD ya if u want ppl to be on their toes waiting for teh next chapter and stuff
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Woah cool, you're paneling isn't that bad, though sometimes a bit confusing XD ah well the illustrations are awesome as always 
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lol, nii-san is brother (older), thou said kinda ina neutral way, not trying too be cute (i dun want it to sound lieks ome cute, i save that for when she's teasing him x'D!)
and yea, i think when i do more pages again after and :iconshirune: i'll put more pannels per action so its not that confusing, liek on the kick, i think its too rushed up so most surely ppl didnt really understand what was going on =?
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Ahh I see, but then wouldn't it be just a bit weird that he'd grab her by the boob like that XD ah well it's funny anyways
And yeah more panels would be good, makes it all more clear
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ill expect him to be thrown through a wall in the next page, hahaha.
awesome art and paneling, keep it up!
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well, idk if will put that much, idk xD!
thanks c=
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haha he's gonna get his @$$ kicked
this manga is pretty interesting, i cant wait for more ^-^
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well, either that or she'll attempt at it
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this looks like its going to be interesting, hehehehe... can't wait to see more!
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Wow. This is soooo meant for male audiences. D;
SEXUAL HARASSMENT right there!
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Hehe i think its fine xD he's just teasing her u know x) i mean he isnt a complete stranger to her either xD
it wont be completly for male audiences! NOWAY! i wont let that happen >D im girl *puts hands up. xD
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Oh yay! Haha. Well, I hope to see more of this.
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blame for that. Remember we got three people working on this so it isn't going to be COMPLETELY for male audiences.
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Ok. then. I'll go and blame him. Yay.
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its nto like that lol dun be oversensitive just he likes to tease her
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ye of course owo;;; how else do u want me to put it ont he manga????
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this is freaking awesome i cant wait to keep reading
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