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KokoroSweetDevil [2015-03-02 22:04:40 +0000 UTC]
Hello! Sorry for the suckish critique below ^ - ^''
You did an excellent job with the face shape and placing the facial features on it from that angle. Although the neck seems slightly too straight for a female. From what I have seen from anime girls, their necks have slight curves that follow out to the shoulders. Also, they have slightly rounded shoulders. For the other eye, they are rather tricky. If trying to hide the eye completely, the bangs should just have been slightly lower. As for the back of the hair, some should be seen from the back from the tilt of her head.
Sorry if that's not so helpful or confusing, I am not use to writing these - u -
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SugaryAshes [2015-02-18 18:48:47 +0000 UTC]
Her head doesn't seem to fit on her neck, also, it seems like we should be able to see her right eye at least a bit.
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