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YoriOkami β€” Touka Kirishima with Flower Crown

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Published: 2015-02-15 22:49:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 509; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description At first I was gonna draw a random person in a flower crown but then the drawing started to look like Touka so I continued to make it look like Touka and this was the result.

Also, idk why but in this picture it seems like the proportions are off in some way, either because of the shoulders, neck, or maybe the size/positioning of the head...for some reason though there's nothing off when I look at it in my sketchbook, so maybe I'm imagining things (or maybe it's the angle)???? Maybe one of you guys could give some input?
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Comments: 6

KokoroSweetDevil [2015-03-02 22:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Hello! Sorry for the suckish critique below ^ - ^''

You did an excellent job with the face shape and placing the facial features on it from that angle. Although the neck seems slightly too straight for a female. From what I have seen from anime girls, their necks have slight curves that follow out to the shoulders. Also, they have slightly rounded shoulders. For the other eye, they are rather tricky. If trying to hide the eye completely, the bangs should just have been slightly lower. As for the back of the hair, some should be seen from the back from the tilt of her head.

Sorry if that's not so helpful or confusing, I am not use to writing these - u -

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YoriOkami In reply to KokoroSweetDevil [2015-03-02 23:58:30 +0000 UTC]

It's fine, thanks for the tip! I'll be sure to remember these things in the future!

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SugaryAshes [2015-02-18 18:50:18 +0000 UTC]

...if you want tips on drawing necks, follow the link:

www.pinterest.com/characterdes…

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YoriOkami In reply to SugaryAshes [2015-02-18 19:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'll check it out!

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SugaryAshes [2015-02-18 18:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Her head doesn't seem to fit on her neck, also, it seems like we should be able to see her right eye at least a bit.

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YoriOkami In reply to SugaryAshes [2015-02-18 19:43:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I agree with her head not fitting on her neck, I noticed that when I was done. ^-^' I'll definitely work on that next time. With the right eye being covered, though, I did that intentionally because her hair is drawn that way in the actual series. Thanks for the tip, though!

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