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Published: 2011-12-04 19:35:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1552; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 33
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Description
Pir. (my oc.)
Yayy!~ Irken Art;
can NOT stop...will NOT stop
Drawing such pretty lil Irken Bastards.
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More about this drawing:
Invader Ninja Pir is the OC I draw the most.
She is accutaly my first OC. -__ -
Btw, why yes. I know Irkens DO NOT have boobies.
Pir isn't a full Irken, she is also human and some
what a cat.
LOL. jajaja, in this drawing Pir is indeed holding her Katana
BUT MY GODDAMMNN SCANER IS TO SMALL TO CAPTURE
THE REST OF THE KATANA!..
paw print, paw print, paw print, paw prints! :3 ~<3
Irkens Β© Jhonen Vasquez
Pir Β© ~YoshiReibu
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Hey person! THAT SHEEP IS THE SHIT!!!! lol I finally found you, nyao!
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Hey I just saw this picture in the group messages, and I just read the comments in your description as well as the ones with Athenafire.
At first I was a little skeptical of the 3-species-in-one biology, and had a little bit of a difficult understanding with what you were saying, but once I read your defense in the comments below I honestly could see where you were coming from. (My characters were more pieced together than Frankenstein at one point-- that's just the mindset I had at the time. I still even do it from time to time, it just happens.) I love your artwork and how expressive it can be, and I love the idea you have behind this character.
I'm not like Athenafire, "I'd go for this because of that!" She has good intentions but sometimes if someone doesn't know her it can come off as a little demanding, and a little callous sometimes. My purpose in this group isn't to bash on creators and OCs, because no one is perfect in creating OCs and it takes time to 'perfect' them. I'm basically here to alleviate some of the pressure on the creator from the other members and help with anything the creator may have an issue with.
If you're ever wanting any feedback from anything I'll be as nonjudgmental as I can, and if you'd rather me (or really anyone else) not get involved I completely understand.
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Although this is very nicely drawn...you need a little help. This may come off as rude but I just came home from a long day at work and I get a note from my group that helps possible Mary-sues become better characters, and helps great characters get polished off for better presentation. I really hate doing this to people who are rather decent/good artists...but...you really need help with this. The only real problem that is apparent is...well too many species. Unless the grandparents/parents went for zooiphilia [link] and/or inter-species breeding...this shouldn't happen. And if that is what happened...get off of deviantArt and go to Furaffinity, you'll get a MUCH bigger audience there with that crap.
The other complaint I got was her being a ninja...it's PASSABLE but if she was to be a ninja...that means no sexy poses in art since Ninja's are supposed to be highly trained, very reserved, and not posing for camera's at all. If you want her to wield a Katana and look sexy at the same time...I'd go for a Scimitar and being a space pirate! They wear much more flattering outfits anyways. Contact me as soon as you get this message.
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Thanks for the help and info. You see, this 'too many species' is true in some ways. But this character's parents are bass-hearing unknown and unwanted felines too dammed to deal with.(they are not human, nor irken)her appearance is not like this because of 'zooiphila' or inter-species breeding. Why this character is 3 in one goes down to Sci-Fi genetics changing one form to the other, by a force much wanted and found by her. This neon glowing type of ball figured force-power changed her to cat species into something more human like. (Sounds very crappy, I know.) This character is now a unplanned mixed up change in species, and I'm not the only one drawing these 3-in-one types of characters.(: But I can see the way you look at it.
Ah, yes. Ninjas... I know that ninjas don't show off their skin and pose.. no no no no, ninjas [[like u said]] are highly trained time on time go assassins to kill without a sound, and I love that.(: You see, in some fighting games there are very showy ninja characters that are sexy as hell. I'd doubt that they pose for the shot in defeat.. but those characters are similar to this one here. Oh, why shes in a pose like this is because she's on the other side of her brain...thinking and full with sorrow.. the shot doesnβt rly mean to be sexy...it was just the way I put it... I would've drawn a evil bloody purple eyed irken ninja assassin with NO cuteness...but where's the fun in that?(: Oh, and the katanna isn't rly hers..she's just hanging on to it because it's her only weapon now to hang on too. Next time I'll explain more in the description so ppl won't freak and wonder.
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Right...I'm going to recommend you to a good friend of mine. My deal is with illogical things, her's is just when it's a plain mess that makes no sense at all. Its like...you put WAY too much on one character. It happens a lot, I honestly have a few of my characters who I keep putting too much on them as well. Her name is but sometimes hangs out on tell her I sent you and send her a link to this picture and tell her I said this character needs just some organizing to help it make sense. She's really nice, I go to her personally for help on my characters and even my school projects for college.
I wish you luck and I'd do this myself but I have eight other clients I'm working on that are being rather difficult.
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Meow. >:3
Lol. Love kitty irkens.
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Uh huh....
If I may ask, how is your character a hybrid?
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Define 'hybrid' please. =]
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A hybrid is a mix of two species. For this instance, a cat and an irken.
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Oh, I see :3 she was changed by this neon light absorbent ball figured force of heat energy that was wanted and hated for reasions to long to explain.
that force changed her into a diff species, but only half of the power in light force can change her halfy too. thats why she could be 3-in-one. :3 Weird, different...I kno. XD
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Lolz. [= so how is yours an Hybrid?
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716 was just your average service drone, working for my scientist OC,Slanen, when she was in a rush to give something to him. as she was running, she bumped into a shelf with beakers of DNA. Out of pure luck, the beakers had missed her, leaving her safe. But she had forgotten about the broken glass that lay there on the floor. She stepped on a piece with cat DNA on the tip of it, forcing the DNA to go into her blood stream.
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Ooooh, cool. nice story. :3 ...owch, but wouldn't it hurt to have that DNA running thru her vains and changeing her? >.<
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716: it was excruciaing... My creator sucks ass..
Me: I love you too
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Hahaha. XD omg I lol'd!~
I'm sometimes mean to my OCs. CX
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Mine all hate me xD one, I forced into cannibalism, another got into a childhood accident, and the others are workaholics or loyalists xDDD
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Haha omg, rly? XD daww'h.. poor OCs. But I got to admit You did it, like a boss.. tho. XD haha
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Haha your welcome. :3 Thanks for the lols! CX
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OMG! Dies ist so nett Yoshi! Ich liebe sie sexy little katana, ist das kitty zu allem bereit!
Translation:
OMG!!! This is so cute Yoshi! I love her sexy little katana, this kitty's ready for anything!!
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I said it once, i'll say it again! Your really getting better, this is absolutly amazing!
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this art work is truely the best pic i've seen all day! her posture is magnificently drawn and her clothes are very unique! but what truely blew me away was the magnificent way you drew her eye's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its amazing! thank you
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Okidokii. D'Ashfault is embedded in mah arm, an' I t'ink I's bleedin' just a lil bit, so I's gonna go t't'hoshpital an' ge' an X-ray on mah arm, and it's nothin' broke, well oh well I just a'wasted mah time at t'Mergency Ruum. So a'why does she have a katana, does not she know those things are sharp and pointy and best left to stupid people, so as you can watch from a safe distance a'when t'ey cut t'emselfs? I's on the night delirium, y'know a'was it is yes? I thought so... Mah sorries for trollin' I's too incapacitated to speech coherently, altho I must've been a bit impressed t'click in t'first place. So congrats to you on impressing a tired, bored, person who's about t'go t'bed... Ahahah... it takes skill or luck, whichever flatters ya more. Haha. I'm'a go a'bed naow, a'fore I causes some troubles... Good night friends.
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...... uh.. She has a katana 'cause she's a Ninja.
. . . . .random..
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What did I say? Oh yeah.. I remember that. I sometimes forget to block all my stray thoughts from reaching my fingers and getting typed. That said, it might have been on purpose... Still.
Now, my apologies and a serious comment. Yes it is really good, although the katana doesn't look right, it's the handle, the blade is fine. And she likes to cut those floaty hearts in half I noticed. I absolutely love how the eyes look, they kinda seem to be gemstones almost. Question though: she's not crying, that's just grey spot on eyes right?
Overall score: 3.7,3.8-ish./5 (better than mine, anyway. Especially my older ones which score more around 1.5 or so.)
(Oh, by the by, I think it's samurai that use katana. Still though, smart to have one on hand, for just in case purposes. Smart kitten.)
Oh I know. I'm a pretty random person usually.
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