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Published: 2023-02-16 22:04:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 2527; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 1
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Okay,  let's start with a short story recap!

After Delmar and Reed are teamed up they are doing their best (or worst) to work together. It includes insults, broken fingers, grimaces behind the other one’s back, creepily staring at the other one when he sleeps, plotting to kill the other one once he finally gives into his insomnia and falls asleep, and other general petty behavior. 

On a trip to Norfolk (The hidden shifter town out in the wilderness where the society hides their weakest and exiled inhabitants), Delmar, Reed, Neutron and Gravity hoped to learn more about their enemies the black shifters. They stumbled upon a gathering hosted by the black shifter Cameron also known as Antimatter. She was rallying the weaker shifters and the outcasts to join a rebellion against the shifter society and the council. 

Delmar reads her mind and in her memories, he finds the abandoned town Brenner where the black shifters have been gathering. Reed and Delmar are ordered to go to Brenner to investigate further and potentially spy on them.

Back home, Maxine, Reed's old mentor, caught her eye on Ramsey and has decided to take over Ramsey’s mentorship. Reed is horrified by this and decides to bring Ramsey on the journey to keep him as far away as possible from his ominous old teacher.

On the way to Brenner Delmar makes a poorly planned attempt to run away, but Reed catches him and accuseshim of being a coward. Right after they see Brenner on the horizon, but it’s not abandoned at all. Smoke rise from the factory chimneys and robots have deforested a large part of the woods. 


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I'm gonna try my hands on one of the bigger fight scenes   this is going to be a two chaper comic. I've always been really bad at action so it's a huge challange. But So far I got a good feeling about this project.  

You can find the original chapter here  Delmar's storyline part 38 - Brenner

If you're only interested in reading my comics you can find them in chronological order here  
If you're a bit more hard-core you can find the whole written narrative from start to finish here Chronological reading list  

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