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Oh mah gawd-
Thank chu-
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Your art is very nice! This is a good start for a fan character, but there are some flaws. The most obvious would be the similarity to the marionette, which has been stated before so I won't elaborate much on that. The second thing would be the Kitsune theme. All of the other animatronics lack tails or fluff in general, so I think subtracting those aspects would add to the creepy effect and the believability. I would also stay away from the "blood dripping from eyes" or "crying blood" trait, because it is overused and does not really add to the scariness because of that fact. I mean, unless she had a kid stuffed in her, that would explain the blood and make me look like a doofus x P. If she does have kid stuffed in her (and if she is a normal animatronic in general) I would suggest bulking her up a bit. You can still keep her feminine figure, but add some weight at the same time. I would probably pick a different color scheme as well, maybe more light colors. I do enjoy the extra facts about her and thought you did very well on those. Good luck !
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Oh she's pretty! And It's great to see another puppet animatronic every now and then.
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Happy you think so :3
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I agree, it looks identical to the puppet, with slight color changes.
But other than that it looks like a very nice animatronic character!
I'd also love to see a background for her
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I actually writed and posted here on DA her backround. Unfortunately, it is in italian, but i will translate it in english.
Anyways, i told you what i already told the other guy, i did not get inspired by the Puppet, their similarity is not did on purpose.
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Ah, nice.
I already saw what you told The-E-guess-corner, I'm just saying that I agree with what they said. ^^
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well this is a good character even if it's based on "The Puppet", like the Kitsune kind of effect she has and the colors are just great, I can definately see her with a knife
what bugs me a bit it's that it looks TOO identical to the Puppet, no offence but it does
others than that it's a very well desing OCs, nice job
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I know she look too much like The Puppet, but you know what's the worst thing?
I did not got inspired by him to create her, i was inspired by a friend of mine.
But i noticed just later that she loked a lot like The Puppet.
Maybe i will change a bit her design in the future.
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no need, like I said, all in all it's a great desing, honestly
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Hum, alright.
Thank you, anyways.
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your welcome. . .hope I didn't offended you
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No, you didn't
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