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yourdude68 — New dog in town (German Shepherd tf)
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Published: 2017-11-04 01:39:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 22843; Favourites: 112; Downloads: 0
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Description Jennifer was fresh out of  university, she had been here to learn how to become a police officer, specifically she wanted to be in the K-9 unit. She applied for a job in a suburb town. As most suburb towns are, drugs are sold and bought as in any town, the problem had been bad for a while so the K-9 unit was large and well trained. She felt this would be the best place to work at.

She soon got the job and on her first day she was tasked with a job. She, as she had always dreamed, got to watch over and train some of the K-9 unit. She was ecstatic, she had went off to the kennel as fast as she could. With some minor tips on what to do she was left alone with nothing but the dogs. She quickly took a liking to her job before she spotted something peculiar on a table near her.

Looking over Jennifer had spotted a harness for a dog. “Strange, shouldn’t this be on one of the dogs?” She says to herself. Looking at the harness she had noticed something even more strange, the harness had her name on it.... this couldn’t have been a prank, she had only been here a couple hours. She quickly looks at the dogs vests and not a one had the name Jennifer on it. She was creeped out for a while before remembering they were supposed to get a new addition to the K-9 unit soon.

She had continued her day as normal but the harness still kept in her mind, she couldn’t seem to not think of it, she felt consumed by it almost. After a quick walk with one of the dogs, to keep them in shape and all, she had come back to put him up. She ends up making eye contact with the harness again. “Oh, what the hell” she says “I’ll put it on, besides no one come in here anyways”. She then puts the harness on herself. Strangely the harness fit rather nice on her, too nice actually. She then felt strange, as if something about her identity was off.

She had always liked dogs but she never wanted to be one, but she found herself wanting to go on all fours. She resisted the urge but unbeknownst to her, she was changing in other ways. Brown fur had covered the back of her neck as some of her hair started to turn the same color. The fur soon moved to the front of her neck, but still, she had not noticed. She then took out her phone an noticed something strange “what the hell?..” she says staring at her neck in the dark reflection of the still turned off phone. She then put a hand to her neck, now Jennifer knew what was going on in almost an instant...she was the new addition to the K-9 unit. She was speechless, she stood there unmoving as the dog she had brought in winced at her.

The changes continued, her fingers had started to fuse. She then ran to try the open the door but found the door locked. Large back pads had started to grow on them as well, along with her thumbs shrinking in size before disappearing. Her fingernails became black and sharp, along with them growing in size and becoming retractable. Staring at her paws she realized she wasn’t scared, she felt as if she wanted this now actually. Almost as if she had wanted it her whole life. She can only crack a smile as her paws get covered in the fur.

The fur makes its way up her arms as they get thinner and less complex. She now voluntarily gets down on all fours, the other dog licking her face. She backs away as her shoulders become less complex as free rotation in her arms become impossible. She feels as happy as she’s ever been, feeling like she belongs in the world and has a purpose as her spine extends out of her back into a tail. She wags it in the air back and forth in a steady rhythm. She sticks her tongue out, panting like a dog. She was now long past caring about what she looked like.

The other dog lays down on the ground panting happily as Jennifer starts to grow fur on her upper back and chest. Her chest starts to flatten as her spine changes somewhat, locking her from being able to stand upright for long. “This is the best day of my life..” she says quietly as the other dog barks back, almost as if he understood her, she tries to bark back but can’t really do it well yet. The fur moves to her lower back where her tail is still wagging happily.

Her rear also changes flattening out some, she was a dog now a big butt wouldn’t help her in any way now. She continues smiling as her feet fuse into paws, growing black pads on them as well. “I-I’m So h-happy” She says as it now gets harder for her to speak. Her legs snap and reform leaving everything from the neck down a dog. She starts laughing, crying a couple tears of joy. She didn’t know why, she had never in her life wanted this to happen until now. The dog comes back and starts licking her face again.

Her face now starts feeling the changes and her nose was first, it darkened and become wet and cold. She felt new smells arrive, smell now became a vibrant landscape for her, telling stories about people and places. Tears continue to fall down her face as her eyes become a jade green. Her ears start to change as a light fur starts to grow in them and on her ears. “I...I am a d-dog” she says “I am *wince* a-a...” she doesn’t even finish her sentence before her tongue flips out of her mouth, to long to fit in there at the moment. Her ears move upward in her head as they become larger and pointed. She lets out “god... *bark* I’m just so h-*bark*” it was getting hard for her to talk at all now.

Her sense of color starts to drain some but she was happy with having a good sense of smell in return. Her face gets covered with fur as her hair is now completely gone, only fur remains on her head. Her teeth sharpen somewhat. Her lips are made into a black coating on her muzzle as it starts to grow. As her muzzle grows to its complete size she says “wh-why *wince* did I get t-to *bark* l-live my drea-*wince*” her muzzle grows now to its complete size.

Her mind starts to become stranger. Concepts of writing and human language become lost to her as primal and leaned instincts start to set in for her. Jennifer was now a fully fledged, healthy German Shepherd dog, ready to catch crime and stop evil
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Comments: 7

Inry [2017-11-04 09:35:40 +0000 UTC]

I see you did some researtch. But, of course, dogs have rudimentary thumbs on their forepaws (not on hindpaws).

You did some repears: " arms as they get thinner and less complex.... her shoulders become less complex". Try to do descriptions from hero's POW, like "her arms thinnied and when she tried to wiggle her fingers, she can't do it seperately..." Try to describe her exploring range of movements, there are some which dogs can but human can't.
Some about her smell, not just "telling stories about people and places.", but describe what she can smell now, other dogs, humans visited this place ans surrounding. Try to avoid abstract descriptions.

I think, she is not completly dog now. She is simplier and more obedient, but still understands some concepts of human actions and basic commands. She could even remember her past life, but prefer her current state. The total mind wipe is too much, and not useful for K9.

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yourdude68 In reply to Inry [2017-11-04 12:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the criticism my guy, I like feedback on my stuff

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KnownCamer0n123 [2017-11-04 02:00:46 +0000 UTC]

nice job, very well written.

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yourdude68 In reply to KnownCamer0n123 [2017-11-04 02:01:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! This actually didn’t take me that long

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KnownCamer0n123 In reply to yourdude68 [2017-11-04 02:02:07 +0000 UTC]

well, its definitely better than my first one.
on a different note, could we continue our rp?

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yourdude68 In reply to KnownCamer0n123 [2017-11-04 02:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the compliment!

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KnownCamer0n123 In reply to yourdude68 [2017-11-04 02:23:00 +0000 UTC]

no problem!

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