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Published: 2005-09-07 08:46:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 180; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description fractured wounded
breaking doll
limping lurching
falling doll
down your smirnoff
drinking doll
are you hurting
breaking doll?

tell me how
you're walking now
lie and say that
you're fine now
pretend it never
happened now
I can see you've
fallen down

disintergrating from the inside
something's eating up your soul
you've tried running but you cannot hide
you're almost empty; don't you know?

touch your skin too hard it breaks
letting the remnants of you show
crumbling around the edges
there's not much time to go

all that you were
it's gone now
your old friends
don't want you now
your story isn't
better now
wake up and see
you've fallen down

pieces are missing
darling doll
you don't make sense
confusing doll
you're so unclear
fading doll
don't disappear
belove'd doll

disintergrating from the inside
something's eating up your soul
you've tried running but you cannot hide
you're almost empty; don't you know?

touch your skin too hard it breaks
letting the remnants of you show
crumbling around the edges
there's not much time to go

you've fallen down
clumsy doll
are you hurting
broken doll?
don't disappear
belove'd doll
i'm always here
my darling doll
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Comments: 6

benevo [2005-10-06 10:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh! Nice

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yourebroken In reply to benevo [2005-10-06 10:57:53 +0000 UTC]

thankyou.

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nbaAngel [2005-09-21 12:26:05 +0000 UTC]

I like it, how u called them a doll
its cool

that ones cool

'down your smirnoff
drinking doll
are you hurting
breaking doll?'

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yourebroken In reply to nbaAngel [2005-09-22 02:30:21 +0000 UTC]

inspired by the latest fads. thanks.

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Maikaduriel [2005-09-10 11:05:50 +0000 UTC]

You have a way with structure The pace is great in this poem and the recurring doll theme makes it feel so detached. Take a bow m'dear!

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yourebroken In reply to Maikaduriel [2005-09-11 09:12:53 +0000 UTC]

nah, i'll dance instead. I'M DANCIN' LIKE A MONKEY!!

woOt.

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