benevo [2005-10-06 10:52:04 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh! Nice
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yourebroken In reply to benevo [2005-10-06 10:57:53 +0000 UTC]
thankyou.
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nbaAngel [2005-09-21 12:26:05 +0000 UTC]
I like it, how u called them a doll its cool that ones cool 'down your smirnoff drinking doll are you hurting breaking doll?'
yourebroken In reply to nbaAngel [2005-09-22 02:30:21 +0000 UTC]
inspired by the latest fads. thanks.
Maikaduriel [2005-09-10 11:05:50 +0000 UTC]
You have a way with structure The pace is great in this poem and the recurring doll theme makes it feel so detached. Take a bow m'dear!
yourebroken In reply to Maikaduriel [2005-09-11 09:12:53 +0000 UTC]
nah, i'll dance instead. I'M DANCIN' LIKE A MONKEY!! woOt.