Comments: 13
hearts-cry [2005-11-23 23:38:55 +0000 UTC]
wow,this is amazing, and so true...fav.
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Wom-bat In reply to yourebroken [2005-11-20 15:43:43 +0000 UTC]
Only somewhat? I did use the "oh my god" emoticon didn't I? By which I mean to say, "Ohmigod this is good".
Okay I probably didn't need to explain myself, I was just sudden;y concerned I used the "emote" in the wrong context.
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shreee [2005-11-19 01:20:24 +0000 UTC]
I love it
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harkanwal [2005-11-18 18:47:23 +0000 UTC]
This is very well written, very descriptive and analytical. I guess it is the way you put the facts of life that everything in a relation is a facade to get to sex, which makes this poem very ' in you face '. But the way you have written it, it still has a touch of an ideal for love, a longing for love beyond desires.
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