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yourebroken — Miles Stretch and Yawn [NSFW]
Published: 2005-11-18 10:40:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Words exchanged,

conversations begun?

Doubtful.

No sex, no speech.

Why bother?

Miles stretch and yawn;

and I no longer crave you.

No more do I seduce you,

for now I have no reason.

Flirted my way through

your defences,

through your pants.

Without the sex,

will there be speech?

Bodies do not mesh

and sweat.

Is there anything left

to say, now our bodies

are mute?

Asphyxiated.

Dehydrated, lusting after

something more than

enticing delicious threats.

All-consuming desire has

evaporated.

Like you.

I have no desire

to speak, now that there is

nothing more to us.

Can we ever talk again

now that sex

is out of our picture?

Of what?

Do tell.

Empty exchange,

hollow dialogue.

Speak of that

which interests me.

“                           ”

Suspicions confirmed.

And of your pursuits?

I can say even less.

Suspicions confirmed.

Miles stretch and yawn,

and I have no ambition

to melt the space away.

My comfort zone

a one hundred mile radius.

So far away;

and now I am glad of it.

No awkward silence

in the street, at school.

No sincere effort

to make friends again;

too much bad blood.

Blood born of confusion

and poison taints it,

taunts me, haunting

sleep and dreams.

Sex has fallen

by the wayside;

as has our existence

once fused in playful debauchery.

The simple ability to converse

of matters other than

lustful exploits

does not come easily to us.

Even now we argue,

fight over past deeds

involving you, me,

the wrong done by all.

The promises broken,

forgotten, in the warm haze

of loneliness with another

staring lovingly, wishing, hoping.

Mine, yours,

doesn’t matter now.

Without sex,

there won’t be speech.

We filled hours with

tempting, giggling,

sweating and kissing.

Now, without the

tension?

What could there

possibly be?

Miles stretch and yawn

and we cannot fill them with words,

no matter how well intended.

Well-intention between us

produces only more bitterness.

Resentment builds,

distrust has a foothold.

Miles stretch and yawn

and we have nothing to say.

Bridge over what’s done

burned by trust

and tonight,

your greed.

My greed, lust, gluttony

matched now by yours.

We are on

even ground.

Tooth for tooth.

Are you glad of it?
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Comments: 13

hearts-cry [2005-11-23 23:38:55 +0000 UTC]

wow,this is amazing, and so true...fav.

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yourebroken In reply to hearts-cry [2005-11-24 03:19:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Wom-bat [2005-11-19 14:17:42 +0000 UTC]



And I mean this in the best possible way.

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yourebroken In reply to Wom-bat [2005-11-20 07:37:38 +0000 UTC]

thats quite alright! i'm somewhat flattered, thats for sure.

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Wom-bat In reply to yourebroken [2005-11-20 15:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Only somewhat? I did use the "oh my god" emoticon didn't I? By which I mean to say, "Ohmigod this is good".

Okay I probably didn't need to explain myself, I was just sudden;y concerned I used the "emote" in the wrong context.

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yourebroken In reply to Wom-bat [2005-11-21 05:06:52 +0000 UTC]

i was terribly flattered by the emoticon. i'm glad you thought the poem was 'omg' worthy. and i thank you muchly for the wee face of 'omg'. it was very cute.

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shreee [2005-11-19 01:20:24 +0000 UTC]

I love it

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yourebroken In reply to shreee [2005-11-19 07:21:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the fav.

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InkStainedFingers [2005-11-18 21:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Totally agree. It's well written and the description is spot on. Can relate to the idea of nothing left when the tension is gone. Very evocative. Good job xx

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yourebroken In reply to InkStainedFingers [2005-11-19 07:21:32 +0000 UTC]

wow thanks!

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InkStainedFingers In reply to yourebroken [2005-11-19 21:26:41 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome It's a great piece xx

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harkanwal [2005-11-18 18:47:23 +0000 UTC]

This is very well written, very descriptive and analytical. I guess it is the way you put the facts of life that everything in a relation is a facade to get to sex, which makes this poem very ' in you face '. But the way you have written it, it still has a touch of an ideal for love, a longing for love beyond desires.

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yourebroken In reply to harkanwal [2005-11-19 07:20:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much for the fav. and the comment!

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