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Published: 2005-10-05 12:15:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description "You reckon we'll ever be the same?" She asks. Her small hand in mine,
we walk by her ocean
for another afternoon.

"How's Danny?" I ask. Subject change;
the delusion lives that
little bit longer. With her hand in mine.

A sigh from her tiny lungs.
"I don't know. I don't take his calls;
                                                      I don't make calls to him."

Am I supposed to be glad? I think so. I don't know.

"Oh." Is the best I can do.

"And you accuse me of hiding," she says simply.
But she doesn't stop
holding my hand.
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Comments: 8

Maikaduriel [2005-10-07 08:13:30 +0000 UTC]

Ths one's a polaroid. That won't make sense if you haven't read my comment on part 2 lol. I reckon it still does stand alone well enough on its own but maybe I'm just not objectifying myself enough. Insightful, once again

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yourebroken In reply to Maikaduriel [2005-10-07 11:52:05 +0000 UTC]

i love reading your comments. they're so happy! *scuttles away to post final piece*

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Maikaduriel In reply to yourebroken [2005-10-07 12:56:24 +0000 UTC]

I like posting happy comments. It makes you happy Maika happy, Elly happy, happy happy... joy joy!
Maika's going through a happy phase in her life at the moment She has enough happy to share.

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yourebroken In reply to Maikaduriel [2005-10-08 01:51:30 +0000 UTC]

you share that happy good, you hear me? or else...

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nbaAngel [2005-10-06 07:04:17 +0000 UTC]

nice, i want to read the next one

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yourebroken In reply to nbaAngel [2005-10-06 09:55:59 +0000 UTC]

its going up... now!

ZOOOOOOM!

oh look, ya missed it.

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Zauzau [2005-10-06 02:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Also nice. This one is a little too cryptic to stand alone, but makes for a nice chapter. I want more! (can you tell I like reading your work?)

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yourebroken In reply to Zauzau [2005-10-06 09:50:40 +0000 UTC]

!! wow thankyou so much. and cheers for the watermelon. i'm-a gonna fill it with vodka.

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