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Published: 2014-08-24 23:35:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1441; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 1
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Description I apologize again for the delay, though this will be my last time. School is starting tomorrow and once I'll be settle back in my schedual, everything will come to normal again ^^

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Comments: 13

ThatBLUspy [2014-09-16 19:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Again,really wanted to thank you for making this. I keep reading and reading this over again - AND EVERYTIME I STILL NEED TO KNOW WHAt HAPPENS NEXT JFHGKJDHFJKH

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yukyumme In reply to ThatBLUspy [2014-09-28 23:04:41 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks ^^

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ThatBLUspy [2014-09-16 19:19:45 +0000 UTC]

I looked inside the expressions vocabulary book inside my head but then suddenly THE EXCITMENT BURNED ALL THE PAGES OF IT UPON FINDING THIS COMIC djfhshgjeahgkjreahkjg HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN- oh goggy gogo goo I don't even know where to START CALIHOORBALAGOLO [inhaaaaaaaaale] -okay Zee calm the fuck down [siiiiiiiiigh]
Okay first thing! Your style *w* The way you try to not to "pretty things up" but instead give it a more of an artistic dark touch of "beautiful hideousness" if that makes sense to you,fits the world of "OFF" so. WELL! The slightly "burnt off" edges of elements and all the broken parts!

Second! What you do with perspectives of places,what you do with the poses of the characters- I- don't even- you need to be an animator or at least a storyboard.I mean you TOOK your time you to not only come up with a plot (however I believe this came naturally to you,didn't it? CB ) but detailize every single thing in each frame! That's FANTASTIC! You really do seem like you enjoy giving your all to your creations and that is appreciated so. MUCH <8). I swear some - if not ALL of the comic- looks like a storyboard to an amazing OFF animation! All we need is some voice actors and I can assure this as a HYUUUUUUUUUUUGE SUCCESS of infinite BRILLIANCY.

Third! Those.......flipping.....EXPRESSIONS....Do I really even NEED to say anything?! I HOPE YOU ARE AWARE OF HOW AMAZINGLY EXPRESSIVE THEY ARE! Not to MENTION creative! I can feel the fear coming from the Elsen and differ it from his anxiety and the anger that is coming from the Judge's eyes is so powerful - I particulary adore the way you choose to draw teeth eue. Again,really fitting to the world of "OFF".

I also see that you are (well your DRAWINGS are) quite organized,too,considering you not only put up numbers of pages but decorate them! YOU AMAZING MODERGLUPPER- THANK YOU SO. MUCH FOR THAT

Now the concept - I (and most likely others) actually was really ACHING to see how the Judge and the little Elsen would continue their exitence. And seeing someone with respect for the cannon rules,amazing talent and a really captivating idea,knowledge of how things -work- in that almost if not completly hopeless dark world ALONG with how the CHARACTERS and their ROLES work- in a word,one with a real seal of approval making a COMIC about it is more than I could ever DREAM of! I can't believe this comic EXISTS.

And the last thing that is the most important to me is they are 100% IN-CHARACTER You absolutly NAILED it! Oh my GOD I'm CRYING how much you nailed it! The ROLES,the way of SPEECH. You have put things on the edge by making Judge snap at the Elsen,because he has a really good reason to. He does not INTEND to make the elsen turn into a burnt but the dying-doomed situation that you made that is really likely to happen is making it happen,I wonder how will things go from here,I fully trust you that it will be just as in-cannon as the comic already is  

I must say I'm EXTREMELY picky when it comes to comics based off the things I am a fan of,everything must be strict to the cannon and if something goes way off I simply don't care anymore and either don't read or read without a lot of enthusiasm but YOU. You got me SQUEALING. I'm not even exhaderating I SQUEALED ALL OVER MY DESK GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA - DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW HARD IT IS TO MAKE ME SQUEAL?! WELL YOU AND YOUR COMIC DID YOU WIN THE TROPHY

I don't think I even need to tell you that I am DYING to see where you shall lead this next! I really really really REALLY hope that you will not give up on this. But any choice you'll make I'll respect.

...Oh gosh I didn't even notice how long my comment turned out to be PFFFFFFF GEEZ THIS ISN'T EVEN A PARAGRAPH ANYMORE THIS IS A WHOLE DAMN CHAPTER O__________O -I'm so sorry <'D;;; this keeps happening everytime I see something that knocks my socks off which happens really rarely but when it does I SUDDENLY BOOK.

I'm really sorry about that but..I really wanted you to know how much your work is appreciated. Heck I didn't even say ALL I think yet all the rest in my head is just liquids of pure chaotic overexcitement from EYEBALLING INTO THIS MASTERPIECE. THERE'S TOO MUCH TO HANDLE I'M GONNA-
 

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yukyumme In reply to ThatBLUspy [2014-09-28 23:04:29 +0000 UTC]

okay. first of all I apologize for taking so long to respond, I had to reread your whole comment many times because I was just that happy to see someone enjoying my comic that much and isn't shy to share their thought (and also tons of works and being busy in general and perhaps a bit lazy but you didn't heard that from me) dude thank you so much for all of this, I really worked hard for that comic and reading this feels like an immense satisfaction from all the work and effort I putted in the comic, as much for the art as for the analyse. 

I need to agree with you tho, I tend to have a preference for people who tries to get closer to the original, in any story, movie, game or whatsoever. Before doing the comic, I did thought about the game's meaning, why and how and the goal of it, then settled a plot that would probably interest a lot of people (but mostly interest me lol because if I didn't liked doing that, I wouldn't have done it XD) and I was very, very careful to be the most ic possible and not let my fluffy feelings get a hold on it haha. Elsens are cute but creepy as well and not quite pure of heart either, and even though everone told me so far they liked the Elsen better and thought the cat was the creepier of the two, personally, I would much prefer to share the company of the Judge instead of a man who might kill me out of stress : P

But yeah thanks again, if you did read my previous comments, you probably already know I've originally planned to have 2 parts, each of around 12 pages, but after completing the first part, I knew the second wouldn't come. Though I'll post some drabbles and prework I've done on it so everyone will anyway be able to see what was supposed to happen. So I hope you'll still like the rest of the story, and until then, lets watch how the Judge is gonna cope with his own emotions

also you made me laugh my ass off with all those expressive overexcited emoticones XD

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ThatBLUspy In reply to yukyumme [2015-01-29 18:34:58 +0000 UTC]

[23456765434567876545678 YEARS LATER FINALLY OPENS INTERNET TO FIND THAT YOU RESPONDED RJGFDSJRHTGFDSJRTGEDJRJKJRHGKJERHGJKEG- [inhaaaaaaaaaaaaale] okayokayokayZeecalm...down.....calm.......DOWN........Caaaaa-[HEAD EXPLODES ALL OVER THE SCREEN]

Ooooooooooooooooh my GOD I am SO. SORRY! I- I- I- wouldn't even think that you'd RESPOND at ALL because -well you seem like an amazing persondoodel with amazing talents and those are usually very very busy to be replying to long passionate loveposts of how their art is amazing from some weaboo weirdo from the depths of the internet ([cough cough] to be honest though I already read your reply even earlier but...then I got too scared and overhelmed with excitement to even TRY to respond 8D A REPLYIN HNNNN)

..................You have no possible idea how HAPPY it made me that that lil commentomine made your SOCKS SQUEAL WITH HAPPY GOO EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNIMSOHAPPYIMGONNA- -okay NO. Gotta keep ma beautey cool' mmm...
LMAOOOOO WASN'T SHY?! DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH WILLPOWER IT TOOK ME TO ACTUALLY POST?! XX'DDDDDDDDDD But then your in-characterness and the getting of the game from the depth and doing it -correctly- AND with admirable enough to make me JELOUS (SERIOUSLY I wish I could draw like you! ) -it..just overpowered any fear that was holding me back CB>. Because- because it's important that important people know they're important. Because if they don't,it will be very sad when they will start loosing themselves <8C And then the world starts loosing amazing artists and they don't even know how amazing they were.

OHOHOHOHOHO BUT YOU'RE WELCOME IS SHOULD BE COMING FROM YOU BECAUSE YOU POSTED THIS! You just made it sound like I just fed you something you were cravingly hungry for though (and eeeeee the feeling of not being useless...IT FILLS ME. IT FILLS MEEEEEEEE ).and oh GOD FOR ALL YOUR DAMN EFFORT you DEFINATLY DESERVE each and every little word,I'm just sad that other people never take the time to say ALL what they're thinking <8/ But if they would,know that they would definatly have to say more than just what they did! [sigh] a loooot of people are lazy aren't they?
HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO [clings to you like a glue] .____. You're busted now I'm not getting my eyes OFF of you you lil-..........[snnrk].....geddit...OFF of you? eve heeeeeeee-iknowiknowoverratedpuns WHO CARES i'msosorry
When I was used to not to be scared of drawing I used to always go for the cannon too <8) Now I go for what's cannon in roleplays! Better than nothing ovo Plus fun!
Duuuuuuuuude you were GENIOUS to think out this plot it works so WELL! And you obviously really care for the characters which fills me with so much joy <8) 
Oh god the holding onto the fluffy feelings YOU GET ALL MY RESPECT FOR THAT because there are WAY too many people that just don't know how to hold onto their horses I mean- I understand why they make it fluffy - they want to make the poor lil bubus feels better eeeeh- But what I want is reality and what is possible to be made out of it. Which is what you are making and you're the ONLY ONE that I know that does it and does it with 100% accuracy and have my panties HON HON HON HON HON- [shot] When they fluffy it up,any scent of the true taste of OFF dissappears and I don't care to stay there anymore
Boy I'll say About the unpure hearts of elsens and Judge I mean. They all seem to have differently pure hearts,some have less pure and some are more,which can be seen by who Batter is attacking and who he leaves to be. Have you noticed though how in different zones they behave differently? -What am I saying of course you have. Sometimes it seems to me that the purest-hearted elsen live in zone 1. I'm not saying their hearts are pure of course but hey,one of the elsen actually willingly took Batter's liberation and well they tend to attack a lot less-  but then again it might be that they are just a little too stable (well,most of them at least) because Dedan's screams at them made them get used to things that are slightly scary and face the fact that it won't go away (that and that the specters aren't as scary/powerful ) In Zone 1 the elsen are like oh well here's a person,he's scary but not as scary as dedan i think i can try to talk to them a little..if I have to. but in Zone 2 where elsen were getting nothing but cotton candy and didnelaaaan made them create their own fears because they never seen the -truely- scary things...until they saw specters and I think a zone 1 and a zone 2 elsen would react to a specter differently. In zone 2 since there's no obvious danger anywhere the danger must be hidden EVERYWHERE [paranoid glances] everything is dangerous and EVERYONE IS DANGEROUS  

How ironic it is that the one that is afraid of danger WOULD be the danger of danger actually happening,eh? 8l The Judge is also a little OFF of how you're supposed to behave and might be judmental here and there but he's definatly reasonable. Unlike the elsen who just have one rule. Don't run,don't touch,don't look,don't sit,don't breathe,don't LIVE. (and dear GOD please don't make me bump into an elsen from zone 3 X'DDDDDDDD Even though it's wiser to hang with Judge I must say I'd still choose to hang with an elsen,not because of anything,but mostly because I just somehow understand them really well
Oh! OH OH!! I know that...even though I've been practising on drawing-ehehehe I would..NEVER be able to compair to your style <8) But- what if I'll make it into a comic FOR you? Or make somethin outta the drabbles and stuff? o3o -I mean you don't have to but..um..just-an offering helping hand ahehehe <8D;; ...e____e;; -IREALLYWANTTOKNOWWHATSGONNAHAPPENNEXT




(and SNNNNNNNNNNNNRK bawwwwwwwwwwWWWWWWW CCCCCCB> I MAKED A FUNNY!! 8UUUU [rewards self with not biting own tongue from anxiety panics]
-phehehehe very glad you got some vitamin C outta all this CB> )

....phew. My GOD I'm too scared to scroll up and see what monstrousity I typed to you 8D GOOD LUCK REPLYING TO ALL DIS.

BIASHCH

[walks out of room with sunglasses on as the room explodes]-OH SHI-[RUNS]

I am.........so.........sorry.
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yukyumme In reply to ThatBLUspy [2015-10-13 21:38:40 +0000 UTC]

haha <3 actually I'm not THAT busy to reply to people on the internet, its mostly life itself who keeps me busy (homeworks can be such a kill x-x). Your enthusiams kills me everytime xDD I guess I dont have much more to add than what you've already said about Off haha. To me it goes worst with every zone. And seriously, I love Elsens, but the Elsen I drew in this comic gives me the chill... :/ lets say I wouldnt want to hang out with this guy. And never ever be shy to talk to me cause tbh im as terrible as you about that when it comes for me to talk to popular artists too xD

I must say too that I must thank you for your deadly patience. I finally post the next following pages only after the end of the world has happened Dx, oh well better late than nothing??? I saw your message many months ago, but never really had the energy to publish the last pages I dunno why. Anyway im back for now and better take good use of it while it still goes on Dx

Thanks again for all your love sweety it totally makes my day <3

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Cow-Butt [2014-08-30 12:56:46 +0000 UTC]

Is that a hint of Elsen burning I'm seeing? o3o

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yukyumme In reply to Cow-Butt [2014-08-31 17:22:07 +0000 UTC]

huehue looks a lot like it is, isn't it?

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Shadow-Creations [2014-08-25 19:32:23 +0000 UTC]

i stumbled across this on tumblr. it's really cool! your style is amazing. keep up the good work

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yukyumme In reply to Shadow-Creations [2014-08-25 20:04:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the nice comment I appreciate them greatly! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Shadow-Creations In reply to yukyumme [2014-08-25 20:26:50 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome :3

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Mongezeas-Kira [2014-08-25 01:14:26 +0000 UTC]

im in love ;w; your style is so good ughh

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yukyumme In reply to Mongezeas-Kira [2014-08-25 03:26:01 +0000 UTC]

awww qvq thanks this motivates me you dont even know <33

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