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yumeiro โ€” The Sonata

Published: 2009-01-29 15:21:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 697; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 15
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Description this is my very first attempt at photomanipulation, I hope I will learn more and eventually one day become good at it
constructive critique and suggestions are welcome ^^

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clouds: ~rushpoint-stock
field: ~Alegion-stock
model: =liam-stock
hair: =Shoofly-Stock , ~gorjuss-stock , ~Darkresources , ~Falln-Brushes
poppies: =Sassy-Stock
windmill: *flowerpowerstock
birds: *Adaae-stock
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Comments: 7

TomAraya1981 [2009-02-01 00:57:43 +0000 UTC]

1ยฐ manipolazione?
ammazza...per quanto mi riguarda c'hai ben poco da imparare ancora
complimenti davvero bello, forse magari un po piu di luce nel viso e nel braccio sinistro della modella (viste le fiamme), ma per il resto รจ una bomba

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EverlastingEvenstar [2009-01-30 07:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Seriously? This is your first attempt at photomanipulation?? That's amazing! Great job I also have great interest in the violin with the fire and all, since I *do* play it. ^_^ I will give you a bit of suggestions though that would make it even better (even if I'm not the best photomaniper myself). Compared to the blacks of the rest of the piece, the birds you have flying in the sky are too dark. If the black matched more like that, say, of her skirt, then it would be better. Another thing would be wear the horizon transitions from field to sky. It's a bit stright-lined, not exactly blended or natural-enough looking. You might could blur the edge a little more (or erase it a bit with a blurred-edge eraser brush), and then perhaps you could darken it a bit to make the colors a little more blended-looking. Hope that helps a little Nice start!

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yumeiro In reply to EverlastingEvenstar [2009-01-30 22:38:22 +0000 UTC]

hehe yes, this was my first attempt with photomanipulation I have used photoshop for quite some time, but that was my first photomanip

thank you so much for your suggestions, I actually never see mistakes, no matter how big they are, until somebody points them to me
so would you believe I haven't noticed that horizon line until you showed it to me? (and I "eeeek!"ed when I saw it )!
I'll be more careful the next time thank you again ^^ <3

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EverlastingEvenstar In reply to yumeiro [2009-01-31 02:06:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, glad to be of help with that then! ^_^ Have fun with it

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Dronevil [2009-01-29 17:33:46 +0000 UTC]

per essere il primo non รจ affatto male, anzi!
mi piace la crazione in sรจ e il modo in cui hai amalgamato gli elementi!
complimenti

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yumeiro In reply to Dronevil [2009-01-30 22:38:48 +0000 UTC]

grazie mille <3

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Dronevil In reply to yumeiro [2009-01-31 01:09:03 +0000 UTC]

figurati

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