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Published: 2007-07-08 04:32:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 975; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description With yet another dimension clash in the swamps,Tal and along with her friends were able to go to the other place where avatar Lien dwell.

This time with Tal were the swamp bender twins Sudna and Sundai,the sand bender Arck,the child of freedom fighters Olive,and Kuma the firebender.

Nthey had went to Omashu only to discover Daichi being taled by half the authorities(again)for distroying the cart system(again).After having to appologize to them,he properly greeted all of them,grunting at Sundai ofcourse,and them invited them to party that night at the Fire Palace.

Well,later in the evening Nakuta had caught Sundai flirting with a firenation beauty.I can tell you she was not pleased of this,she slapped him and ran away starting to cry.

Sundai shook his head,shamed,and excussed himself from the fire maiden.He ran into Sudna who had witnessed the scene from afar.

"You really are a dunce you know!"she yelled at him;he only lightly listened as he thought up an apology to tell her."Why cant you just keep your hormones in your pants where they should be?!"

"Whatever"he said snidely and walked out on the balcony.He only could think about Nakuta.He hardly ever saw her but whenever he was hitting on a girl in his own world he could not help but remember her angry face;this might be the first time she actually started crying.He hated when girls cried.It always made him feel guilty,even if they werent crying because of him.

Then he looked down and gasped.

Nakuta and a boy were duking it out,he was firebending...it must be Zeth.He could tell she was losing,was it because of him?

Sundai rushed from his shock and ran down the stairs,rushing past his sister and Lien and round the corner where Nakuta must have ran out.

He came out just as Nakutas boomarang flew out of her hand.He got it right in his face.Nakuta turned around and gasped to see Sundai behind her.

"Im sorry!"she said panting."I mean--no I'm not you jerk!!"

"Nakuta!!Watch out!!"Sundai yelled,ignoring her insults.Nakuta turned around to see a giant fireball hurling towards her;she prayed to her brother in heavan,to anyone,to save her.She shut her eyes tight,she didnt want to see it,even though she felt the heat coming towards her,she wanted to pretend it wasnt there.

"Hey.You okay my princess?"She looked up to see Sundai,embracing her.But his face,even though he was trying to hide it behind a smile,was twisted in pain.Nakuta could smell the ordor...what was it?

It was burning skin.Sundai's burning skin.

"You ass!Why did you do that?!"She yelled at him,tearing much more than before.

He could not anwser,as he let go of her a fell to the ground.Unmoving.

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OMFG
story XD

it just kinda poped into the description as i started writing.

BEHOLD
a cross over pairing of my own!
MAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!!!!
SUNKUTA!!!!!!!

yeah,it doesnt look like a manga page I KNOW
it was a doodle at first
then it turned into a page
and then i tried to make it LOOK like a page

please dont crit on this.

also,romy,if you wanna make a page/story to continue this,feel free!!
*behind a curtain silently prays she will*

also
yeah,if you take note there IS another character in the talgang,Kuma the firebender
not exactly planned out.
for the second or third arc when azula is revieled.

benders,avatars,world(c)Mike and Brian,Nick
nakuta,zeth,lien,daichi(c)~Mumy-chan
sundai,sudna,tal,and all the other characters(c)KECA[~Yurbleyurble13 ]
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Comments: 23

Mumy-chan [2007-07-08 04:54:50 +0000 UTC]

*dies of fangirl happiness...AGAIN* OMGOMGOMGOMG-*cough*Papa told me to get off the computer, that's why I've been missing. OH MY GOODNESS!!!! The comic on it's own it's amazing, and the story-SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

Loved the part where they're all introduced (Daichi's jeaaaalous, Daichi's jeaaaalous)

I wanted to break EVERYTHING when Sundai got shot, and he did it to protect her Poor Nakuta, this Akkoh's death all over aga---------I MUST FINISH THIS!!!!

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Mumy-chan [2007-07-08 04:59:37 +0000 UTC]

XD
what is that the third time youve died on me?

yeah,i guessed that
just when i finished was gonna note you for tomorrow that it was then i see ONLINE and you know im all omfgyay!!!!

lol
i was wondering if you got the note

yeah XD
Kuma shall be drawn soon(hopefully)

X3 of course he is!!!
thats what makes it FUN!

sorry....

i just....i dunno,thats how it came out
he cant die!!!CONTINUE!!!
dont make me explode!!

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Mumy-chan In reply to Yurbleyurble13 [2007-07-08 05:21:57 +0000 UTC]

*cough* yes I have a tendency of doing that. QUIT MESSING WITH THE NATURAL ORDER WOMAN!!!

Woot! Hope to see Kuma soon

Daichi: Oh for the love of Oma, LADY I'M NOT JEALOUS!!!

Well, lucky for him, he CAN'T die (mainly 'cause Akkoh died with no chance at being healed) there's Tsuki, and maybe Sudna if she's a healer

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Mumy-chan [2007-07-08 05:29:18 +0000 UTC]

XD
lol
WHO CARES its funny and shows how much you lurvs it <3

yeah,along with the EVIL AIRBENDER!!!
well,one of them,a girl,i've had her in my mind for a while

YES YOU ARE!!!!!

HE CANT DIE also cause hes my character and he cant die in your world XD
Sudna?A HEALER?*laughs*

Sundai: WTF woman!!my sister!?SHES NEVER HEALED ANYTHING!ahahaha
Sudna: AHEM,who bandaged you alll those times you were bitten while you were trying to tame those flamidiles?!*swampwater whips*

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Mumy-chan In reply to Yurbleyurble13 [2007-07-08 05:43:24 +0000 UTC]

EVIL AIRBENDER!!!? Dude! In Ron Weasly famous words: Whickeeeed

Daichi: *blush* Am not! I'm just...protective

That's okey Sundai, we still have Tsuki, she may not bend, but she's an incredible nurse

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Mumy-chan [2007-07-08 05:45:34 +0000 UTC]

XD
yeah
the hidden airbender tribes had a few ones that hated the avatar to a point where theyd join azula

Sundai: youre jealous
Sudna: bend a bridge and get over it

lol
XD
yeah,how do you think he got that army of flamidiles on his side?

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Mumy-chan In reply to Yurbleyurble13 [2007-07-08 05:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow, why do they hate the most adorable Avatar in the cycle? He's so lovable I tells yah

Daichi: *deep breath* Listen, I was told, loooooooong ago, to take care of her. That's as far as I can ever go. I can't afford to be jealous, I have a job to do. Besides, she's a princess, and I'm- I'm just a monk, okay

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Mumy-chan [2007-07-08 05:58:36 +0000 UTC]

wellll,
maybe its cause he dissapeared for 100 years and they were forced underground in fear of the firenation?


i think youre a sexy monk(when youre older that is)

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Mumy-chan In reply to Yurbleyurble13 [2007-07-08 06:06:40 +0000 UTC]

Daichi: *toph grin* Yeah, it's not like you ever let me forget

Me: And he's back to normal ladies and gentileman

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Mumy-chan [2007-07-08 06:09:46 +0000 UTC]

XD
lol

any ideas for names for her?
im thinking Kira maybe or Lailac

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Mumy-chan In reply to Yurbleyurble13 [2007-07-08 06:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Is it for an airbender girl?

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Mumy-chan [2007-07-08 06:15:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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Mumy-chan In reply to Yurbleyurble13 [2007-07-08 06:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Kira's really pretty, but if you like to lengthen your list, search for short, delicate names, of Chinese/Indu/Korean background. Here's a great place to start your search [link] =&submit=submitted&x=58&y=0 You can set it to the country and gender you need (though personally I like Kira)

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Mumy-chan [2007-07-08 06:26:39 +0000 UTC]

XD
i'll use Kira
if you ever read death note,Lights evil name is Kira,thats where i got it from(kinda,ive know it from other stuff too)

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Mumy-chan In reply to Yurbleyurble13 [2007-07-08 06:28:16 +0000 UTC]

Kira the airbender it is

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Mumy-chan [2007-07-08 06:32:11 +0000 UTC]

YAY!

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Inkdeath [2007-07-08 04:37:05 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS AWESOME. The shading looks so profesional.

but whenever I see AtLA fics, i feel uncreative and n00b-like and all around stupid.

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Inkdeath [2007-07-08 04:38:54 +0000 UTC]

maybe,not really in my opinion
thanks though

NO
YOU ARE NOT
every single avatar thing with OCs
CONTAINS AN OC AVATAR
EVERY SINGLE ONE
just feel better

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Inkdeath In reply to Yurbleyurble13 [2007-07-08 04:39:39 +0000 UTC]

K

Sure.

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Inkdeath [2007-07-08 04:43:38 +0000 UTC]

=_=
im DRAWING tea jin and gonna pread the word about her >3

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Inkdeath In reply to Yurbleyurble13 [2007-07-08 04:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Ummm, ok.

You really shouldn't, people will kill me.

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Yurbleyurble13 In reply to Inkdeath [2007-07-08 04:46:46 +0000 UTC]

NO THEY WONT

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Inkdeath In reply to Yurbleyurble13 [2007-07-08 04:52:11 +0000 UTC]

*cowers*

Okay.

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